Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

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Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Jade » Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:57 pm

I followed you
into the luminous world
of literature
listening to your lyrical
promises
perfectly played to tear
me in two.

I saw you in a perfect square -
a window, a frame.
your tongue slipping, sliding,
through your serenade
the strangeness of it....

A beauty - statuesque -
bathing in magnolia moonlight;
starlight sprinkling
on your soft mahogany hair;
a halo

the horizon in a half-step
in motion with the pouring light
yearning for reunion - adoration lost, stolen
gravity the vandal

What once was a work of art -
now graffiti on a shadowed wall
leaving me holding on
hoping
Pleading for your return.






I know its late... but better late than never, right?
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by heinzs » Tue Dec 04, 2007 6:32 pm

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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by nekot » Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:22 pm

Beautiful imagery...

I think of a muse gone dry...perhaps just where I am at the moment. I could feel the gravity pulling down the inspiration, the magic.

Lovely write you two!!

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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Floetry Spades » Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:17 am

Yeah it's a tad late :lol: but still very much appreciated. I loved this. It follows the pattern of all the other entries ... very rich in imagrey -- lots of images floating around in my head now.
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Mightfall » Wed Dec 12, 2007 11:56 pm

wow
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Tom Watson » Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:45 am

A beautifully created, co-authored writing that has been moved from the Challenge forum to this forum to allow others to enjoy.

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Post by heinzs » Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:19 pm

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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Jade » Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:18 pm

I'm glad I posted this here otherwise it would have been lost. :angel:
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Ianlast » Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:41 pm

This... is damn good.

Not much more i could say to that :wink:
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Jade » Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:24 am

:bump:
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**

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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by Jade » Thu Jun 02, 2016 7:29 pm

:bump:
Has anyone spoken to or seen amathir?
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words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by heinzs » Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:00 pm

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Re: Follow On (co-write by Jade and Amathir)(nov. challenge)

Post by heinzs » Mon May 29, 2017 9:39 pm

Amathir is posting on PoetryPages at Facebook as Gavin Smith.
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