Intertwined Destinies
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
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Intertwined Destinies
<center> Intertwined Destinies
What’s there to live for now?
Even death seems unwelcome
Now that you are gone
I search for your signs
Within intertwined destines…
Passions unfamiliar
time, always at a standstill
Zealous kisses stealing our breath away
Butterflies in my stomach… Love’s here to stay
Cool breezes tickle my senses
Whiffs of your cologne tortures intense memories
Searching for life… rendered helpless
… within walls of bittersweet memoirs.
You intoxicate me, filling me with overflowing love
I cannot stand being away from you
Intertwined are our destinies
You are mine and I, am yours
Misty memories of sad goodbyes
False promises to touch bases
You were but a grasp away
yet I never realized we would go astray.
Smile… *click* smile… *click*
The camera freezing moments forever
Laughter… smiles and fervent kisses
Forever in your arms, I find my bliss
Captured moments of perfection…
…frozen tears of dejection
Silken promises unfulfilled
Missed chances gone unnoticed
Twirling your little finger in mine
…Walking side by side
Familiar laughter ringing through the night
Lips meeting lips, Fires ignite…
Why is your destiny separate from mine?
Magic was when you played with my unkempt tresses
Kissed my forehead with your sexy lips
I was unaware of how much one burns in love…
Lovers perfectly intertwined
Eyes interlocking, loosing all senses
Fervently whispered I love you’s
accompany heated lovemaking.
Intertwined destiny gone astray
Bittersweet memories now remain
Lonely, walking on a different continent
Wishing for once more to have
intertwined destines </center>
What’s there to live for now?
Even death seems unwelcome
Now that you are gone
I search for your signs
Within intertwined destines…
Passions unfamiliar
time, always at a standstill
Zealous kisses stealing our breath away
Butterflies in my stomach… Love’s here to stay
Cool breezes tickle my senses
Whiffs of your cologne tortures intense memories
Searching for life… rendered helpless
… within walls of bittersweet memoirs.
You intoxicate me, filling me with overflowing love
I cannot stand being away from you
Intertwined are our destinies
You are mine and I, am yours
Misty memories of sad goodbyes
False promises to touch bases
You were but a grasp away
yet I never realized we would go astray.
Smile… *click* smile… *click*
The camera freezing moments forever
Laughter… smiles and fervent kisses
Forever in your arms, I find my bliss
Captured moments of perfection…
…frozen tears of dejection
Silken promises unfulfilled
Missed chances gone unnoticed
Twirling your little finger in mine
…Walking side by side
Familiar laughter ringing through the night
Lips meeting lips, Fires ignite…
Why is your destiny separate from mine?
Magic was when you played with my unkempt tresses
Kissed my forehead with your sexy lips
I was unaware of how much one burns in love…
Lovers perfectly intertwined
Eyes interlocking, loosing all senses
Fervently whispered I love you’s
accompany heated lovemaking.
Intertwined destiny gone astray
Bittersweet memories now remain
Lonely, walking on a different continent
Wishing for once more to have
intertwined destines </center>
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Why does it seem like the most expressive (I don't wanna say "best" because IMO there's no competition in poetry) poem are always ignored.
I felt the passion in this. It just oozes from line to line. Nice write.
I felt the passion in this. It just oozes from line to line. Nice write.
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Thanks Graeme...
Janmew... thanks for your comments... thats how it was inspired... the poem is as is from the heart to the keyboard... to the pages... to you...
appreciate your kind words...
Luv
Nosh
Janmew... thanks for your comments... thats how it was inspired... the poem is as is from the heart to the keyboard... to the pages... to you...
appreciate your kind words...
Luv
Nosh
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Re: Naushin
Debbie wrote:Hi Friend..this poem is full of passion..and yet I feel your pain of a lost love...amazing work...
Hi Debbie...
Thanks for your kind words. I hope you are keeping well!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Re: Intertwined Destinies
Hi Naushin,
Really quite lovely. There are several different textures to your poem ... it is of course passionate, but at the same time there is an innocence about it. There are moments sublime and yet there is pining .........
Sincerity throughout ............ wonderful poetry of love and love lost ....
Hope all is well with you ........ take care ......
.jeanne
Really quite lovely. There are several different textures to your poem ... it is of course passionate, but at the same time there is an innocence about it. There are moments sublime and yet there is pining .........
Sincerity throughout ............ wonderful poetry of love and love lost ....
Hope all is well with you ........ take care ......
.jeanne
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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Re: Intertwined Destinies
jeannerené wrote:Hi Naushin,
Really quite lovely. There are several different textures to your poem ... it is of course passionate, but at the same time there is an innocence about it. There are moments sublime and yet there is pining .........
Sincerity throughout ............ wonderful poetry of love and love lost ....
Hope all is well with you ........ take care ......
.jeanne
Hi Jeanne!!
Yes, everything is well with me... how are you and your family doing?
I thank you for reading and replying to my poetry... re-reading this brought many memories...
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Re: Intertwined Destinies
its amazing how much I can relate to this poem. This is beautifully written, honestly. After reading it, I said "wow." Great work
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Re: Intertwined Destinies
Thank you Nikita Mehra... you are too kind :)
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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