He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

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He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by gordy » Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:20 pm

He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart (from the pruning floor)

He is who put the dance in my feet
But you are the music who moves me
He gave me this tongue craving sweets
But you are the sugar I'm yearning

He put the desire in my eyes
But you're the only beauty I see
He made my mind long for all things wise
Yet it's only you I want to know fully

My ears, made to hear sounds, weak or strong
But with your name alone they are ringing
He filled my throat with many a song
But it's only to you I'll be singing

He filled my soul with a love overflow
But it's to you alone I'll give it
He put the very life in my soul
But you are the reason I live it
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

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Procrastination is his cohort
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Post by heinzs » Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:39 am

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Post by fstasu53 » Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:56 am

Sweetly beautiful. I love this one.

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Post by spanky2007 » Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:50 pm

I really enjoyed reading this one. I can feel the emotion you put into this piece. Great Job.

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Post by hope4ever » Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:46 pm

I really enjoyed reading this. Very heartfelt!

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Moushka » Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:13 am

Interesting gordy.........if a woman wrote this, it could be written 'to God' about her first love.......just a thought......don't want to disrespect your poem.........oh wait.....I get it.....he is God and you is Jesus......or the other way around........oh wait......he is God and you is a wife..........I like this poem :cool:
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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by gordy » Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:45 am

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Jetz » Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:07 pm

Wow, what a fantastic write. First read it seemed lovely, but awkward. Second read, I read it out loud, and then it all flowed. Very beautifully done.

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by gordy » Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:29 pm

thanks
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Hiyu » Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:09 pm

beautiful play of words. i love it! :)
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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by gordy » Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:41 am

:hearts:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Eternal Poet » Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:00 am

Descriptive, Reasoning, Explanatory, What you call a .................... FANTASTIC piece, top notch Gordy, top notch :thumbsup:
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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by gordy » Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:42 am

thank you very much :oops:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Dema » Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:55 am

Great write!!!
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Re: He Will Give You the Desires of Your Heart

Post by Jadynara » Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:42 am

This is a very beautifully written piece Gordy. :)
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