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Post by Floetry Spades » Tue Oct 31, 2006 5:35 pm

"You-know-who is sitting less than 2 inches away from me. Need I say more? ..... I am going to melt." -- excerpt from my journal.


I've trapped you in the corner of my eye
and I am melting like chocolate
within your warmth

You are close enough to taste
I can almost breathe you in
and I long to swallow every inch of your soul
and quench my thirst
with the sweat that glistens like
diamonds
off the mahogany of your skin

I've trapped you like a rat
in the corner of my eye
and I am moaning like a slain eagle
you are to lick my wounds
you are to deliver me my rapture

Do you feel the tremors in my heart?
the muscle that throbs like a pulse

Lord, deliver me from temptation
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Post by Debbie » Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:36 pm

good write Flo... :bow:
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Post by Floetry Spades » Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:11 pm

:mrgreen:
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Post by Turner » Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:26 pm

"Lord, deliver me from temptation"
Lord deliver you indeed. Very creative. I enjoyed reading this.

Turner

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Post by nacona » Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:38 am

Floetry Spades,

I enjoyed this read for its sensual feel, you write this style very well, and I am impressed with you poem. The last line is grabbing, but you know its funny because I have thought that before in a situation like that, which to me makes this realistic. Very nice job, thanks for sharing!

Cheers!

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Post by Floetry Spades » Sun Nov 26, 2006 5:09 pm

Thanks ... you know ... this is just what happens when he gets this close to me.
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"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu

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Post by buttterflies » Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:23 pm

excepting the image of the "rat," i really enjoyed this write, floet... i just have a serious aversion to anything rodent-ish... :lol:.... but well done with the poem. you brought the emotions into a very palpable state; one i can relate to so well... :hello:
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Post by Floetry Spades » Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:19 pm

Thanks a million, Buttas.
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
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"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu

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Post by Angeleyes » Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:48 pm

I agree with buttterflies, rats and I don't get alone to well. This was a sensual write, and I really did love reading it. :bow: :bow: :bow:


But if he made me feel that way I think I would have to set a trap and catch him. I think I would keep him all to myself!!!! :wink: :mrgreen:


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Post by Floetry Spades » Sat Jan 13, 2007 8:49 am

I just might do that Angeleyes.


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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto

"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu

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Re: Diamonds

Post by heinzs » Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:27 am

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