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Berlie
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the nightmare remembered

Post by Berlie » Wed Nov 23, 2005 6:56 am

the nightmare remembered

dreaming...

faded memories
of someone loved
a face I cannot place
the feeling of something lost

gone... somewhere
I can't remember
did you leave me?
forever?

desperation
makes me struggle
I choke on a scream
it comes out a whimper

an arm around me
a gentle kiss
I wake

your face

I remember...

you're still here
I found you

...forever




* my reoccuring nightmare
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Post by Jaysie » Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:21 am

:bow:


absolutely beautiful.
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Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:21 pm

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Post by spanky2007 » Fri Nov 25, 2005 4:05 pm

I really like it. I really enjoy reading your poetry. It has so much emotion in it. Great write.
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Post by Maid of Iron » Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:27 pm

This was an exceptionally good poem. The intensity builds with the dream, and then the soothing ending:
an arm around me
a gentle kiss
I wake

your face

I remember...

you're still here
I found you

...forever
Perfect! Great ending to a very intense piece.

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Post by GoddessErika » Sun Nov 27, 2005 1:47 pm

Awww! I just did that dream two nights ago... thankfully upon waking the same as well. I love it when someone writes a poem that I can totally relate to! Very nice Berlie! :mrgreen:
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Berlie

Post by Debbie » Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:24 pm

Berlie this is a great little write...just love the way it came down..and the ending so surprising.. :bow:
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Post by Berlie » Tue Nov 29, 2005 4:36 pm

Thanks everyone.

I just hoope he is always there for me to wake up to from this dream.
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Post by Berlie » Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:52 pm

annual anti auto prune monster /bump. :hello:

still having variations of the dream... and he is still there when I wake up :grin:
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Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 02, 2006 10:09 pm

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Re: the nightmare remembered

Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 15, 2007 4:50 pm

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Re: the nightmare remembered

Post by Dema » Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:01 pm

I felt the pain! Great emotional write!!! :bow: :thumbsup:
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