Through stormy nights and fiery summers,
We talked and laughed for hours on end,
Giggling at each other's chides and banters
We talked and laughed for hours on end.
One day I saw your luminious eyes
In a way I've never seen before
I saw your wavy lustrous hair
In a way I've never seen before.
The silence of it is enchanting.
This secret trapped in my own heart,
Released only when I need a smile,
This secret trapped in my own heart.
I know that in the end we are doomed
What a glorious fall it would be
Just once to have you in my arms,
What a glorious fall it would be.
-J. Craft
A Gentle Secret
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awww.... beautiful, i say... really a beautiful whisper of a poem....
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pardon me while i sneak in and 
this poem..... 
this poem..... "To be one, to be united is a great thing. But to respect the right to be different is maybe even greater." -Bono (U2)
"You have no choice of subject matter. You write what's in your heart and on your mind unless of course it's crap in which case it means you've thought about it too much." -Bono
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"You have no choice of subject matter. You write what's in your heart and on your mind unless of course it's crap in which case it means you've thought about it too much." -Bono
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V, I'm ashamed of myself. I don't think I've read much of your work. But after this one, I'll be sure to be a regular.
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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: A Gentle Secret
beautifully haunted...i loved your use of repetition...great piece...I know that in the end we are doomed
What a glorious fall it would be
Just once to have you in my arms,
What a glorious fall it would be.
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”
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Re: A Gentle Secret
Great work bumped once again
you may want to sp check luminous unless there is another word I am unware of ;) but NBD hehe. I would be lost without firefox 2.0 which inline checks everything i type with these clumsy mits.
Nice work.
you may want to sp check luminous unless there is another word I am unware of ;) but NBD hehe. I would be lost without firefox 2.0 which inline checks everything i type with these clumsy mits.
Nice work.
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