Sunset on the Sea of Cortez

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Sunset on the Sea of Cortez

Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:52 pm

Color of red lips
on azure sea
tints Spanish villas
into pink vanillas

Through crested
palms
Sols parting kiss
touches a sea
of diamonds

Mango scented breezes
waft through balconies
as lovers
open their blinds

Widows in black lace
chuckle
in remembrance
of sensual siestas

I sketch your nudity
in charcoal
as an offering
to the Aztec Sun
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Post by Debbie » Thu Jun 16, 2005 5:38 pm

Must have turned out to be a masterpiece on the canvas...for it painted a picture on the canvas of my mind.. and I could picture those widows chuckling to themselves..
beautiful E.T
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Re: ET

Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:01 pm

Debbie wrote:Must have turned out to be a masterpiece on the canvas...for it painted a picture on the canvas of my mind.. and I could picture those widows chuckling to themselves..
beautiful E.T
It was sketched on paper and we fastened it to a kite later. Just my peculiar recognition of the transience of such moments.

Who knows how far it sailed.....and yes the wisdom of old women is a treasure yet to be given its fair value.

Thanks for calling it beautiful, Debbie.

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Post by GoddessErika » Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:46 pm

I love the Sea of Cortez!!! So far my favorite place I've ever been! Man I wish I was there now... Miss it very much!

BTW- like the poem too! Hee hee... :mrgreen:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:12 pm

GoddessErika wrote:I love the Sea of Cortez!!! So far my favorite place I've ever been! Man I wish I was there now... Miss it very much!

BTW- like the poem too! Hee hee... :mrgreen:

Thanks Erika and I agree its a great place and so close. Great for a short trip and hassle free.

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Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Apr 06, 2006 6:24 pm

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Post by northstar » Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:28 am

a very sensual poem
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Post by Friend_forever » Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:54 pm

Great write ET... I have never been there... but must be a beautiful place eh? you brought the whole poem alive with imagination...

great write...


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your huge fan.
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I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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Post by Eternum 1 » Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:39 pm

northstar wrote:a very sensual poem
Thanks Northstar :cool:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:42 pm

Friend_forever wrote:Great write ET... I have never been there... but must be a beautiful place eh? you brought the whole poem alive with imagination...

great write...


I still remain,


your huge fan.
It is quite lovely.....completely different from the darker and colder Pacific ocean waters outside the gulf.

and I remain a devoted fan of yours as well..... :bow:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Fri May 11, 2007 1:45 am

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Post by Graeme » Fri May 11, 2007 6:57 am

I love the images this poem created in my mind.
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Post by Lyric » Tue May 22, 2007 8:33 pm

Beautiful imagery. Nicely written.

Thanks for sharing!
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Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Jun 17, 2010 10:49 am

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Re: Sunset on the Sea of Cortez

Post by Jadynara » Sat Jun 26, 2010 10:10 pm

great write. wonderful imagery. this is a beautiful poem. :bow: :thumbsup:
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