**Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06

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Post by nacona » Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:47 am

Heinzs,

This is a beautifully compelling poem, I just had to read it through a couple times! The imageries are sensational, and the read compelling. I love your first line, and your use of visual imagery with color. Lines like

The glasses clink and the squirrel stops
momentarily in his tracks,
then resumes burying his acorn.

this is worded just perfectly! Very nice ending, I do think that I am going to have to nominate this poem as the poem of the week, since I see nobody has found one yet to nominate. Thanks for sharing with us!

Cheers!

Shawn Nacona
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Post by heinzs » Fri Dec 15, 2006 9:46 am

Thank you Angeleyes!


Thanks Shawn... I'm highly flattered!

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Post by Angeleyes » Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:19 pm

I do like this poem! It still give me such a warm feeling after reading it for the fourth time! :grin:



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Post by heinzs » Wed Dec 20, 2006 4:25 pm

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Post by fstasu53 » Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:29 am

While there is a sadness in this, there is a love that shines through. It brought a tear to my eye.

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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06

Post by heinzs » Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:57 pm

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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06

Post by heinzs » Sat Jun 10, 2017 10:50 pm

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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06

Post by audiofool » Mon Jun 12, 2017 5:04 am

Definitely bump-worthy. :cheers:

Well done. Elegant, evocative piece.

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