**Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06
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- nacona
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Heinzs,
This is a beautifully compelling poem, I just had to read it through a couple times! The imageries are sensational, and the read compelling. I love your first line, and your use of visual imagery with color. Lines like
The glasses clink and the squirrel stops
momentarily in his tracks,
then resumes burying his acorn.
this is worded just perfectly! Very nice ending, I do think that I am going to have to nominate this poem as the poem of the week, since I see nobody has found one yet to nominate. Thanks for sharing with us!
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
This is a beautifully compelling poem, I just had to read it through a couple times! The imageries are sensational, and the read compelling. I love your first line, and your use of visual imagery with color. Lines like
The glasses clink and the squirrel stops
momentarily in his tracks,
then resumes burying his acorn.
this is worded just perfectly! Very nice ending, I do think that I am going to have to nominate this poem as the poem of the week, since I see nobody has found one yet to nominate. Thanks for sharing with us!
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
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Thank you Angeleyes!
Thanks Shawn... I'm highly flattered!
Thanks Shawn... I'm highly flattered!
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: **Autumn on the Hill** Poem of the week 12.18.06
Definitely bump-worthy.
Well done. Elegant, evocative piece.
Well done. Elegant, evocative piece.
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