Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)

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Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)

Post by audiofool » Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:50 pm

In a race to ruination
I stumbled on the stair
in an act of desperation
I found a way to care

falling down famously
I nearly forgot your name
plodding aimlessly
when morning finally came

this day the death of doubt
observe the birth of hope
the lines drawn washed out
the slime succumbs to soap

my head was out of order
where did I leave my soul?
no boundary, no border
no body in this hole

I thought I slept forever
then I woke in tears
say you'll leave me never
I'll mortify my fears

you're noble and so wise
your words breathe into me
new life to these old eyes
caged once now I am free.

(For Heidi)
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Re: Sleepover (Divine Intervention)

Post by heinzs » Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:51 pm

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Re: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)

Post by audiofool » Thu Nov 09, 2017 12:21 am

I changed the title. :lol:

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Re: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 10, 2017 12:16 am

I like it
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Re: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)

Post by Mightfall » Mon Nov 13, 2017 5:33 am

I love it and the new title is great
"You leapt into the abyss, but find, It only goes up to your knees"... Nick Cave

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