Country Mile

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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audiofool
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Country Mile

Post by audiofool » Sun Sep 17, 2017 11:22 pm

Don't take my legs
I need them
for standing still
this watch I need
when I've got
time to kill

you're the first
to see real
tears in my eyes
not long now
before they send
survival supplies

in this room
in a wood
far from view
shaky steps
on my own
apart from you

the thought that counts
I'm counting on
my ship to come in
I'm a cliche
that's OK
I always let you win

don't take my car
it helps me
find my drive
my heart I keep
close in case
I ever come alive

there's more of me
you'll never see
with eyes diverted
laugh all you want
the money's good
the mind perverted

in this room
in a wood
far from city lights
I gave myself
days on end to spend
on crazy nights

if you come around
don't expect
service with a smile
you took a swing
you missed
by a country mile.

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Re: Country Mile

Post by Gizmo » Thu Sep 21, 2017 2:01 am

Interesting arguments. Definitely food for thought.
:cool:

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Re: Country Mile

Post by audiofool » Fri Sep 22, 2017 12:31 am

Thanks, Gizmo.

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