My Music Man

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My Music Man

Post by starfire » Thu Jun 26, 2008 6:26 pm

Your hands drum a steady tune,
The counter melody to my quivering voice,
But I don't tell you this vibrato isn't mine,
You're expertise is making me nervous.

You laugh, that dark timpani deep,
And my lively soprano chimes in with you,
As your patient beat guides me,
To an ever dreamful sleep.
"If a man does not know what harbor he is seeking, no light will be enough to guide him."
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Re: My Music Man

Post by heinzs » Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:31 pm

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Re: My Music Man

Post by starfire » Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:08 pm

thnx for trying Heinzs...
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Re: My Music Man

Post by JGarrison » Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:25 pm

how the hell did i miss this? seriously beautiful starfire... the whole thing paints an amazing, emotional picture... love it :cheers:
You laugh, that dark timpani deep,
And my lively soprano chimes in with you,
specially those two lines...
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”

-Jack Kerouac-
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Re: My Music Man

Post by starfire » Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:14 pm

Thank you so much!
I loved writing this...
It was so... musically intimate.

Thank you JGarrison. :)
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Re: My Music Man

Post by JGarrison » Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:31 pm

its josh :P
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Re: My Music Man

Post by starfire » Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:10 am

ok Josh...

I'm Sarah.

:grin:
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Re: My Music Man

Post by Tom Watson » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:05 pm

A sweet tune, thoughtfully and gently laid out...

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Re: My Music Man

Post by starfire » Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:28 pm

Thank you so much Tom!

Good hearing from you again.

:bow:

-Sarah
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