Emotion

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angeltears
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Emotion

Post by angeltears » Mon May 12, 2008 1:54 pm

Emotion

The mirror of my secret soul
Reflects always your lovable face,
Stars move in cycle without goal
My life revolves round one place.
You opened my heart with gentleness,
Filled it with the magic of love,
Emotions so new and ageless
I feel the mystery from above.

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Re: Emotion

Post by Queen » Tue May 13, 2008 6:57 am

simple and elegant, true poetry! :bow:
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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Re: Emotion

Post by angeltears » Tue May 13, 2008 1:34 pm

Oh, thank you Queen, you make me blush :oops:
Your kind comment is much appreciated. *angel

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Re: Emotion

Post by Mellen12 » Tue May 13, 2008 7:00 pm

Wonderful yet again Angel :wink:
"A woman with the courage to step out into the unknown, risking temporary loneliness for a shot at lasting joy, is more than a "single." She's singular. Instead of defining herself by what she lacks - a relationship with a man - she defines herself by what she has: a relationship with God." ~from Dawn Eden's 'The Thrill of the Chaste'

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Re: Emotion

Post by angeltears » Thu May 15, 2008 1:19 pm

Thank you Mellen12, glad you read this. Love, *angel

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Re: Emotion

Post by angeltears » Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:55 am

:critique: *angel

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Re: Emotion

Post by inspired8 » Thu Jul 03, 2008 8:03 pm

:soapbox: Beautiful short sweet and sincere :hello:

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Re: Emotion

Post by angeltears » Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:35 am

Oh thanks for this kind comment - no critique though!
*angel

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Re: Emotion

Post by fstasu53 » Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:44 am

Simply beautiful. (I'm not good at critques.)

Bobbi

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Re: Emotion

Post by angeltears » Thu Jul 10, 2008 1:02 pm

Thank you Bobbi, grateful you stopped to read!
*angel

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