Emotion
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
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- Clearwater Poet
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Emotion
Emotion
The mirror of my secret soul
Reflects always your lovable face,
Stars move in cycle without goal
My life revolves round one place.
You opened my heart with gentleness,
Filled it with the magic of love,
Emotions so new and ageless
I feel the mystery from above.
The mirror of my secret soul
Reflects always your lovable face,
Stars move in cycle without goal
My life revolves round one place.
You opened my heart with gentleness,
Filled it with the magic of love,
Emotions so new and ageless
I feel the mystery from above.
Re: Emotion
simple and elegant, true poetry! ![BowDown :bow:](./images/smilies/notworthy.gif)
![BowDown :bow:](./images/smilies/notworthy.gif)
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
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- Clearwater Poet
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Re: Emotion
Oh, thank you Queen, you make me blush
Your kind comment is much appreciated. *angel
![Embarassed :oops:](./images/smilies/icon_redface.gif)
Your kind comment is much appreciated. *angel
- Mellen12
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Re: Emotion
Wonderful yet again Angel ![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
"A woman with the courage to step out into the unknown, risking temporary loneliness for a shot at lasting joy, is more than a "single." She's singular. Instead of defining herself by what she lacks - a relationship with a man - she defines herself by what she has: a relationship with God." ~from Dawn Eden's 'The Thrill of the Chaste'
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Re: Emotion
Thank you Mellen12, glad you read this. Love, *angel
Re: Emotion
![SoapBox :soapbox:](./images/smilies/soapbox.gif)
![Hello :hello:](./images/smilies/wave1.gif)
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- Clearwater Poet
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Re: Emotion
Oh thanks for this kind comment - no critique though!
*angel
*angel
- fstasu53
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Re: Emotion
Simply beautiful. (I'm not good at critques.)
Bobbi
Bobbi
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Re: Emotion
Thank you Bobbi, grateful you stopped to read!
*angel
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