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Swing (Alliteration usage)

Post by Blaze » Mon Apr 07, 2003 1:13 pm

<a name="#thirty one"> Swing (Alliteration usage) </a>

The squeaky swing
Sings a song of sadness
As a silly second grader sits upon the seat
And makes it swing and sway insanely
Causing the sad swing to be so sore.

Any more lines? Just post some more! This was something I wrote during communications as I was staring out of the windows

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Why

Post by Blaze » Fri Apr 11, 2003 4:32 pm

<a name="#thirty two"> Why </a>

God, why?
What is the meaning of this
Testing my faith
Throwing crap at me until you miss

I know I have my doubts
I know I have my days
But why do you make it worse
By throwing everything my way

God, why is there hate
Is it because Adam and Eve ate from that tree?
But why God,
Why does it affect me?

No God, no one hates me
But they hate some of my friends
And I'm in constant pain
Trying to help me and them

Temptation God, that snake in the garden
Snakes shouldn't slither on the ground
No, they're lower than that
But they're all around

Why God, why do we want?
Why must we always have everything
Love, sex, perfect bodies
To be able to dance and sing

And why did you make solutions to the things that we want?
Rapes, steriods, anorexia
Murdering, suicides, cheating
Running away, and bulimia

God, why did you give us sadness
And let us cry
People only want sympathy now
WHen a "loved one" dies.

Today's music moves me
And dancing makes my mind drift away
I wish more people would do that for you
But to them, you only have one day

God please listen
And please help me
Take away all of the grief
Just let me be, just let me be

God, shit happens.
But where are you?

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Sorry God

Post by Blaze » Sun Apr 13, 2003 8:29 pm

<a name="#thirty three"> Sorry God </a>

Sorry God for my doubts
As I sit here and listen to people sing for you
Dear God, maybe I haven't been sinless
But I know you're watching everything I do

God help me to not doubt again
For now I know that you are real
Just before I didn't believe
I just didn't feel

You loved the world so much, O God
That you gave your only son
But instead of looking up to you
I looed for other ways to have fun

Oh God, you are the one
I just had never seen if before
You constantly made more ways for me to go
But I was too busy staring at that closed door

I wasn't sure
If I really wanted to leave it all behind
And I was t oo afraid to search
For I thought that maybe it wouldn't be you that I would find
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And just to explain the sudden ending I added:

I can't quite finish this poem
For it will go on for eternity
I've been given eternal life
By a God that has everlasting love just for me

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Bus Ride Home

Post by Blaze » Tue Apr 15, 2003 2:40 pm

<a name="#thirty four"> Bus Ride Home </a>

I'm not really sure if this is "dark" poetry, but it's not general, defintly not love and romance, DEFINTLY not humorous, it's not a story, and I'm not an adult so it literally can't be of adult nature. So, this is where it's going.
---

The bus ride home
Is the worst part of the day
No... no one tries to hurt me
But it hurts to hear what people say
To the new girl Cassandra

Josh- You just need to shut up
You being the youngest
You try to look cool
By asking questions you know
Will embarrass her in front of the school

Amber- I'm surprised at you
You were once the hated girl too
But now you say that you're going to "fuck her up"
Damnit Amber, why don't you just shut the fuck up?

Zack- Your sister's funeral was today
So you should have the least to say
Your sister's watching over you
And everything that you do.

Travis- You just like tormenting everyone
It's your source of "fun"
I suggest getting a new hobby
Or you're going to be hearing from me

Justin- I used to think that you were pretty nice
But now I know your heart is full of ice
Cause now you just laugh at the girl
As if she's the biggest asshole in the world

And Cassandra- Yes even you have problems
You just make it worse you idiot
Getting mad at them and saying all this shit
I"ll be your friend, but don't expect me to stick up for you
Because that's your life, and I have one too

So to all the people who sit in seat 9 on back
I have one thing to say about this too
Fuck you.

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Hope it isn't too strong (considering I'm kinda young) But I was sooo pissed today on the bus... and severly dissapointed in all of them. I just never knew...

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Untitled (I always have trouble with titles)

Post by Blaze » Fri Apr 18, 2003 11:05 pm

<a name="#thirty five"> Untitled (I always have trouble with titles) </a>

Coldness
So Cold
I feel it on my arm
My short sleeve has been soaked with icey blood
And I feel it trickle down my arm
My hand touches the wound
But it feels nothing
For there is none
My skin feels warm
But the coldness is there
Because no one's on that side of me
While I sing
So I ask God to take it away
The loneliness and cold
He stood beside me
And washed my blood away
Gave it to Jesus
And I watched the blood - my blood - drip from his nailed hands
And his nailed feet
Onto the ground
The ground soaked it up
And it watered a seed
That became me.

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HAPPY GOOD FRIDAY AND EASTER! GOD LOVES YOU!

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Dear God

Post by Blaze » Sun May 11, 2003 7:54 pm

<a name="#thirty six"> Dear God </a>

Dear God
Where were you today?
I watched one of your own children
Have his life taken away

He faded before my very eyes
He said it was because of my sins -
My cheats and lies

Dear God
It’s been hard for me
Although it’s only one day later
I guess I just don’t see what you see

Why didn’t you save him like he had to others?
He had helped everyone
Friends, family, children, and mothers.

Dear God
Only two days now since he died
Only two days now
Since I cried

God, didn’t you see those tears?
Didn’t you know they were coming?
Or was your vision unclear?

Dear God,
I can’t believe what I saw
He rose from the dead
God, I was in complete awe

But God, now I know what he meant
When he said he died for me
I know why he was sent

God, it’s been three days
And now Oh God,
There’s only one thing I can say…

In Jesus' name I pray,
Amen.

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Let it Go

Post by Blaze » Tue May 13, 2003 6:02 pm

<a name="#thirty seven"> Let it Go </a>

Let it go
Why do you still care?
Let it fly away
Your pain isn’t mine to share.

Let it go
Wake up child, smell the roses
They’re there for you
And everyone else too
For all of our noses

Let it go
So what if you can’t grab
What you can’t reach
It’s just out of your way
Go play on the beach
For the rest of the day
You deserve the break
But remember
You can’t stay
It closes at ten
You’re gonna have to leave then

Let it go
You’ve climbed to the top of the mountain
And there’s nowhere else to go besides down
You’ve reached the highest pitch
Now make the lowest sound
Break every record
There’s always an opposite way
To break the record
You broke today

Let it go
Go home and rest
Believe your mom when she says
It’s for the best
Because it’s only gonna be the best for a little while
And while you’re waiting for that moment to come
Go up to a random person and just
Smile.

Let it go.

P.S. This was written as more of a song/rap sort of thing, so sorry if the layout doesn't go too well

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Hold on

Post by Blaze » Wed May 21, 2003 7:02 pm

<a name="#thirty eight"> Hold on </a>

Hold on
Life’s a tough ride
Don’t let anyone get you down
And not everyone’s gonna be on your side

You just got to hold your head up high
And just walk on by
When you hear something
That you don’t want to hear
You can’t make words disappear
By just saying some more

Don’t put your life
In anyone’s hands
Besides your own
Because then
You won’t be able to keep up with life’s demands

You control your own life
Not me
Not anyone else
So why can’t you see
That you’re screwing your own life
And you can’t blame
Anyone
Anything
Else.

So just hold on
To everything you got
For they’ll be the only things you’ll have
They’re the only things you caught
But let go
Of the things
That’ll slip away too easily
Because you have to drop everything else
To run and catch it

So hold on
And let go
It’s going to be one heck of a ride
Yep, that’s just life.

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Don't Want to Love

Post by Blaze » Mon May 26, 2003 7:24 pm

<a name="#thirty nine"> Don't Want to Love </a>

I don’t think you know
About my love for you
So I’ll show you right now
That I really do

It started in the beginning of the school year
That day we “connected”
During band when we had to play together
Remember that? I’m sure that’s not what you expected.

But you mentioned that day to me later on
That day at the fair
You said, “Remember when Mr. M had us play together?”
I’ll never forget, I swear.

Then of course we had to get in trouble with each other
Because of that stupid Independent Study Project
That little thing
Where we could get out of our science and social studies subjects

Up in the computer lab
On the Internet in a chat room together
Of course Ms. Quinn got mad at us
I really don’t like her

Well, we didn’t really get in trouble
But Jimmy did; poor him
I did end up crying to you though about all of my problems
But you both listened to it all, you and Jim.

Then later on, at All-County Band
Remember when Andrew said that we’d look good together?
To bad you had a girlfriend; one of my best friends
Although you never talked to her

Then about a month later
At the school dance
You’d told me that you liked one of my best friends
But you didn’t think you had a chance

So during the last song
When you were getting ready to go
I pulled you two together
I wasn’t that happy though

The day before Winter Break
We were watching movies in class
I was going one way and you the other
In between two desks there was a small pass

Though it really didn’t last long
When we squeezed by each other
That moment didn’t seem to end right away
I thought it would last forever

Over Winter Break I gave you an email
Just said that I needed someone to talk to
Don’t you get the reason?
Why I chose to talk to you?

So we emailed back and forth
Until we got back to school
Things were getting hectic
You just said to stay cool

And then there was that end of school year party
At Rusty and Stacey’s
We played basketball and football together
Running around in the rain (which made my parents mad at me)

But all the same
We were always looking at each other
You’re big, beautiful brown eyes
Just like your mother’s

Yet of course you had a girlfriend
At least that’s what Mary Leigh told me
And that was strange overall
Me talking to Mary Leigh

But now it’s almost the end of the school year
And I’ve only told a few
About what this poem’s all about
My undying love for you
Yet there’s one thing that bothers me
I don’t want to.

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Been a while since I've really wrote anything... been really hectic at school... I don't really like this poem, it's a bit long... but it expresses my feelings... and that's what counts.

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Baby Ducks

Post by Blaze » Fri May 30, 2003 2:01 pm

<a name="#forty"> Baby Ducks </a>

Little baby ducks grow so fast
Already the half the size of their mother 3 weeks passed
Little ducklings still wobbling around
Born later in the 2nd round

Running, hopping, into each other
Swimming, gliding after their mother

But they’ll grow old
And have their story told
By quacking at me
To stay away from their mighty sea!
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Didn't really like this one... but whatever.

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Could I Come?

Post by Blaze » Fri May 30, 2003 2:09 pm

<a name="#forty one"> Could I Come? </a>

She asked what I was doing tonight
The first Friday of the summer
Said I was going to that church thing
You know, 6:22? That worship service?
Then afterwards to the Narrow Gate
You know, that Christian nightclub?
Allysonhymn is going to be playing there tonight.
But you do that every Friday night! She said.
Well yeah, it’s fun! I answered back.
Then she asked, Well, instead of going to the movies or whatever…

Could I come?
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This was about a girl that I know... she's one of my BEST friends! She's been to 6:22 (the worship service) and stuff before... but that was when I actually invited her. This time she asked to come...

See, her mom isn't really religious and her step-dad is an atheist so she doesnt go to church and stuff... but I'm very impressed how she has changed spiritually... and personality.

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Hidden Love

Post by Blaze » Thu Jun 05, 2003 1:50 pm

<a name="#forty two"> Hidden Love </a>

-NYC-
First just friends...
Best friends that is
He read my online diary
and I read his
So of course we knew EVERYTHING
About each other.

Then the school's AG (accidently gifted) trip
Goin' all the way from NC to NYC
And it was in the beginning of that trip
That he started "flirting" with me

At first it was just for fun
But I couldn't really think it that way
Whenever I was thinking about Ray

We just talked and laughed at first
But then it got all the way to holding hands
We didn't officially go out - we still don't
But I'm not that sure about when this plane lands.

He had his hands on my waist at FAO - that big toystore
At first he acted like he was just tickling me
But then his hands just, well, stayed there
Up on the top floor by the candy
Just in case you ever go
You can see where

Then today - the last day
We were sitting beside each other ona booth
Looking at the Mars 2112 menu
Deciding what we wanted then telling Mrs. Ruth

We stayed in that restaurant for a while - maybe an hour
Me and him comfortably close, laughing with our friends
Once he put his hand on my leg... then we were holding hands

But as everything ends
You may think this story has
This trip has almost ended
But Love lasts

I'll see him som this summer
But next year he'll be harder to find
For you see, he's going to high school -
I'm one year behind

But of course, there's still the bus ride home.

-Bus Ride-
The bus ride home was a lot of fun
And it was at night too
But it wasn't what I expected
That's true

But it was actually more than I did
I was in total bliss
See, now all we need to do is,well,
Kiss.

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NYC was a blast (as you can tell)... and as of right now... i'm still not sure if me and Ray actually 'go out'... we might as well though. Well, we'll see!

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Tiny

Post by Blaze » Sat Jun 07, 2003 7:07 pm

<a name="#forty three"> Tiny </a>

Tiny fingers
Wanting to wrap around someone else’s own
So they know that someone’s there for them
Someone already grown

Tiny toes
Almost ready to run around
But not just yet
First he’s got to find solid ground

Tiny ears
Listening to others
Soon he’ll be talking too
And be heard by another

Tiny feeling
Growing inside of me
Falling in love
With someone else’s baby

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Someone there

Post by Blaze » Mon Jun 09, 2003 9:13 am

<a name="#forty four"> Someone there </a>

Lying in bed
With darkness surrounding me
Can’t move
Can’t breathe
Can’t see
Scared and anxious, not wanting to know what’s going to happen next
Crackling papers on the floor
An eerie shadow by the door
Is there someone there?
I say, is there someone there…?
Hands grope the wall
Rising up and then they fall
Searching, searching
Then finding the switch to the closet light
Brightness empties into the night
And the someone is there no more.
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I've had this strange fear of the dark lately, so this is where this has come from. If you can think of a way to become unscared, tell me!

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Bloody Rabbit

Post by Blaze » Sat Jun 14, 2003 5:19 pm

<a name="#forty five"> Bloody Rabbit </a>

I came home one night
And found Joe the Cat carrying something
It was a rabbit, a baby rabbit
Watching the blood drip from his mouth made my heart sting

I took the baby rabbit; it’s alive!
Then I looked at Joe
Blood dripping from his mouth
I would just never know…

I wonder what it was like to have a precious soul’s blood inside your body
But then I realized, the 12 disciples had done it.
“This is my blood… drink it in remembrance of Me.”
That must have been a real hit

I wondered what it was like to have a precious soul’s body inside your own
Then I realized, the 12 disciples had.
“This is my body… eat it in remembrance of Me.”
It must’ve been like eating their own Dad.

Well, it was like that.

I looked at Joe
And he looked at me
How dare I let his dinner go!
Well, Joe, you made me see.

The bloody rabbit lives.

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