noctornal angel

[nocturnal_angel]

a poem of two


droplets of sorrow , droplets of joy
they dance upon the ground
waiting for tomorrow, reminiscent is the boy
feelings are easily drowned, memories are found
thoughts become unbound, senses of relaxed and unwond
once as a child, a man waiting to redeem
niether tame nor wild, caught amongst this dream
no longer who i once was, confused as to who i will become
droplets come and go with no cause, soothing the souls once they are done
revelations come at a pause, regrets i feel none.

[Haroo]

Great flow brother !!!
Nice write !!!


By the way ... is that a picture of yours with many tatoos
on his arm !!!???

What is it ?

[nocturnal_angel]

well if you go to this link you can see a better picture
http://www.poetrypages.com/phpBB2/viewt ... highlight= not to mention a better understsanding of what my wings mean.

[Blaze]

I love the message in this poem... nice write!

Also, I read the other post that you just posted and all of the comments... you seem like an awesome person and I hope to see you and your poetry around more

[Friend_forever]

Loved your poem, Angel...

Would like to know you better... PM me if thats fine.

Enjoyed reading your work!

[zero1]

you should post more often...good stuff cesar

[nocturnal_angel]

well thanks folks.. what can i say i reccently got the internet at my house but i have to use my roommates computer until i get my own so i'll atleast be able to get on a few times a week(hopefully if i have time after work to get on that is) i' have some more scribbles written down in a note book and i'll try to post them on here if i can. Granted most of them ARE depressing.. but have no fear i'm actually in pretty good spirits to say the truth i jsut find it easy to write stuff from the perspective that i had when i was experriencing the worst parts of my life. but i jsut hope that soem of my writing is able to help others understand themselves or whats going on during troubling times.

[heinzs]

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