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Grandma Moses

Post by Grandma Moses » Sun Aug 15, 2004 5:03 pm

Welcome to the archive of my poetry posted to PoetryPages.com. Click on the titles to go to the poems.

Copyright Laurie Dumouchel
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Email Me at: ldumouchel@aol.com

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From: General Poetry

<a href="#Nightlife">Nightlife</a>
<a href="#Sonnet">Sonnet I</a>
<a href="#Mailbox">The Mailbox</a>
<a href="#Shadows">Shadows</a>

From: Community Poetry Exercises and Challenges

<a href="#Walk">Morning Walk - June, 2004 Exercise in Haiku</a>
<a href="#Chastity">Chastity - July, 2004 Challenge</a>
<a href="#Freedom">Quinzaine - Freedom July, 2004 Exercise</a>
<a href="#Moonflower">For Moonflower August, 2004 Challenge</a>
<a href="#Young">Limerick - Young Poet August, 2004 Exercise</a>
<a href="#OurCat">Limerick - Our Cat August, 2004 Exercise</a>

From: Haiku - Tanka - Renga - Senryu, etc.

<a href="#Dipper">Little Dipper</a>
<a href="#Trees">Riding Trees</a>
<a href="#Guard">Changing of the Guard</a>
<a href="#No">No</a>

From: Poetic Workshop/Critique's Wanted

<a href="#Niece">My Niece</a>

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Community Poetry Exercises and Challenges

Post by Grandma Moses » Sun Aug 15, 2004 5:10 pm

<a name="#Walk">Morning Walk - June, 2004 Exercise in Haiku</a>

A deer family,
butterflies, and pink roses;
just a morning walk.

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<a name="#Chastity">Chastity - July,2004 Challenge</a>

It's true that Chastity was awfully pretty,
even though bald as Kojak and not as cute.
They say churlish Bukowski chuckled at her chicken legs.
Though some thought her cheesy, the cherub
was transfigured one night at a dance.

Her sweetheart was Hyperlink of the High Tex Band.
To her he was the ultimate guitar amateur expert.

Although she was growing grim about the mouth,
just try to act naturally she told herself.
She knew, as a pair, they were like baggy tights
and Wellington boots. Better, I quietly take to the ship.
I’ve got no money in my purse and this dress
Is like a shar pei on its very worst, bad skin day.

Halfway through the second set,
handsome Hyperlink the wrong note hit,
He dropped his guitar, and looked up in dismay.

Suddenly, sexy as a poodle and as sleek as an afghan,
she gave him a smile that brought him back.
The pair was OK then, we'll call it a definite maybe.

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The July, 2004challenge was:

The July Ch..Ch..Challenge

Words;

Chicken
Chastity
Chuckle
Chalk
Churlish
Cheesy
Cherub
Chomping

Phrases ( with oxymorons ).
It's true, she was awfully pretty.
He thought of himself as an amateur expert.
Just try to act naturally.
Baggy tights and wellington boots.
OK then, we'll call it a definite maybe.

Bonus Criteria
Incorporate the name of ;
1. A famous bald person.
2. A pedigree dog.
3. Any 5 consecutive words from the first paragraph, first chapter of the novel Moby Dick by Herman Melville.

Quote:
Moby Dick ... CHAPTER 1 Loomings
Call me Ishmael. Some years ago- never mind how long precisely- having little or no money in my purse, and nothing particular to interest me on shore, I thought I would sail about a little and see the watery part of the world. It is a way I have of driving off the spleen and regulating the circulation. Whenever I find myself growing grim about the mouth; whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul; whenever I find myself involuntarily pausing before coffin warehouses, and bringing up the rear of every funeral I meet; and especially whenever my hypos get such an upper hand of me, that it requires a strong moral principle to prevent me from deliberately stepping into the street, and methodically knocking people's hats off- then, I account it high time to get to sea as soon as I can. This is my substitute for pistol and ball. With a philosophical flourish Cato throws himself upon his sword; I quietly take to the ship. There is nothing surprising in this. If they but knew it, almost all men in their degree, some time or other, cherish very nearly the same feelings towards the ocean with me.

<a name="#Freedom">Quinzaine - Freedom July, 2004 Exercise</a>

Of, for, and by the people.
Was that what we had?
Can it be?

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<a name="#Moonflower">For Moonflower August, 2004 Challenge</a>

For Moonflower

The ocean glowed before her
Like a mystic new age picture.
The seagulls, waves, and even the clams
Had become blinking holograms.

Every speck of sand and fragment of shell
Flamed as though from deepest Hell.
Logs in the dunes glared like floodlights.
Gone was the serenity of seaside nights.

She awoke with a scream but it was all gone.
It was only a dreadful dream brought on
By yesterday’s sight of the little lights in all
The newfangled school supplies at the mall.

The challenge was to write any kind of poem about a member of Poetry Pages. Moonflower has posted beautiful poems about the ocean and recently posted a poem about shopping for school supplies. These were my inspiration for the poem.

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<a name="#Young">Limerick - Young Poet August, 2004 Exercise</a>

A young poet alone in his room
Considered the earth and its doom.
He was scared by the news
Of the fast burning fuse,
So he sat there to wait for the boom.

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<a name="#OurCat">Limerick - Our Cat August, 2004 Exercise</a>

Our cat loves to look at the scene
Out the window all pretty and green.
When she spots little birds,
She chitters out words,
Like she’s over indulged in caffeine.

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<a name="#Walk">A Walk - Haiku June, 2004 Exercise</a>

A deer family,
butterflies, and pink roses;
just a morning walk.

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Haiku - Tanka - Renga - Senryu, etc.

Post by Grandma Moses » Mon Aug 16, 2004 8:01 am

<a name="#Dipper">Little Dipper </a>

Star, winged acrobat
Diving in rushing waters
Daring little dipper.

July 26, 2004

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<a name="#Trees">Riding Trees</a>

There once were young men
who rode tall, swaying treetops
in roaring windstorms.

July 14, 2004

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<a name="#Guard">Changing of the Guard</a>

Honey bees are gone
but orange butterflies have come
To the lavender.

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<a name="#No">No</a>
Brilliant colors of
Dahlias and Cosmos defy
the changing season.

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From: General Poetry

Post by Grandma Moses » Mon Aug 16, 2004 8:23 am

<a name="#Sonnet">Sonnet I</a>

Friend Flora’s mother, Letha, led the way,
Her Pekinese beside her, trotting fast.
Then close behind we followed her that day,
The three of us enthralled by all we passed.

We walked across the fields of grasses green,
With care traversed a steep and woodsy hill
To places with a beauty rarely seen,
For fifty years remembered with a thrill.

We dodged the Devil’s Club and jumped across
The tiny streams careening down the slope.
We stopped before a shallow cave with moss,
Some ferns, a pool, and peace to give me hope.

With here, no wilderness in which to roam,
I now must find that peace within my home.

July 14, 2004

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<a name="#Mailbox">The Mailbox</a>

The hills behind our home continued south
For fifty miles to the Columbia River Gorge.
Across the gravel road before the house
The trees and fields soon dropped three hundred feet
To the swirling Chehalis River at the base.
To the west, it was a quarter of a mile to the end of the road.
To the east, one passed about a dozen homes
Scattered over the four miles to the closest store,
And it was six more miles to a doctor or ice cream cones.
With no electric lights, the only glow
At night was from our Aladdin lamp and the moon.
Our silver mailbox stood across the road.
With its majestic, crimson flag erect, it could
Compel the speeding postman to stop for our mail.
The bold Route One, Two Seventy-nine on our box,
Could bring us mail from any place on earth.
Each one of us watched that silver box with hope
Or apprehension for different types of mail.
I hoped for one more comic, Donald Duck,
A holiday present, or an unexpected delight.
Without a telephone, either landline or cell,
My parents hoped for mail with family news.
They waited with apprehension for the dreaded bills
From Sears and for the car loan with the bank.
In nineteen seventy-eight, I was thrilled by the box
Of silver with the little red flag standing proudly across
The tree-lined street from the house that I had bought.
Again, it was four miles to a store and ten to a town,
And even farther to gas, to work, and other needs.
My car and my phone made the miles seem shorter here,
But it was my mailbox that kept me from feeling alone.

August 3, 2004

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<a name="#Nightlife">Nightlife</a>

The plots of my dreams are lacking in logic.
They reach no resolutions
and shamelessly repeat themselves.
Some go on and on, even
providing me with intermissions.

Sometimes I build a dream around
a sound that threatens to pierce my sleep.
While my psychedelic dreams
are woven around the physical discomforts
of illness and medicinal side effects.

But the nightmares that I dread
invent fantastical melodramas
to stifle the pain from psychic wounds
that during the day are held in check
by a band-aid of logic and planned distractions.

June 27, 2004

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<a name="#Shadows">Shadows</a>

The sun’s slanted rays lit the gardens
with its most luxuriant tones,
while the George Tsutakawa fountain cooled the air
and canceled the negative noise of traffic
that spilled over the protecting berm.

The four musicians in summer shirts and shorts
formed the band led by Deems Tsutakawa, distinguished
by his pink framed, reflective-lense sunglasses.
His brother Marcus was on bass guitar.
The artistry of the father is continued in his sons.

As the fountain was stopped for the performance,
we heard the soft voices of the audience
and their delighted laughter as they greeted friends.
A group of children squealed and cavorted.

Most of the audience had savored at least
sixty years of music of every kind and quality.
With this store of musical memories,
they were prepared to fully appreciate the performance.

Midway through the concert, “Sundown”
by Wes Montgomery, seemed like a portrait
of the patients across the street, imprisoned
by Alzheimer’s disease, who lose all sense
of reality and solace with the setting sun.

As the lively beat of “Tough Tofu” ended the concert,
the elders in the front rows cast
long shadows across the grass and
the empty chairs seemed somehow significant.


Laurie Dumouchel
8-25-2004

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From: Poetic Workshop/Critique's Wanted

Post by Grandma Moses » Mon Aug 16, 2004 9:20 am

<a name="#Niece">My Niece - From "Post Your Best Free Verse"</a>

lives life with the enthusiasm of a child
splashing puddles with her brand new yellow boots.

She quells her hand-me-down deficiencies
with her heritage of love, strength, and gentleness.

Speaking of her husband and children,
brings a light to her eyes that brightens
the darkest corners of my being.

An hour with her brings back the splendor in the grass
and the glory in the flower.

July 12, 2004

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