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Unlimited Offer

Post by poeticpiers » Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:02 am

Unlimited offer.

With broken wings no bird can fly,
enjoy the freedom of the sky
But wings can heal and often do.
This is the hope I offer you.
Like broken hearts can be repaired.
As you will find if you’re not scared
then you will find a love that’s true
This is the hope I offer you.
You have a dream and must believe.
If you persist you will achieve
Discard whatever’s stopping you.
This is the hope I offer you
So grasp this chance and hold on tight
and everything will turn out right.

15-Oct-08

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Re: Unlimited Offer

Post by Spazway » Sat Nov 01, 2008 2:20 pm

I loved the message of hope and comfort this piece offered.
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Re: Unlimited Offer

Post by poeticpiers » Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:40 pm

Thankyou but thing do have a habit of sorting themselves out in the long run
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Re: Unlimited Offer

Post by JadedHopes » Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:16 pm

poeticpiers wrote:Unlimited offer.

With broken wings no bird can fly,
enjoy the freedom of the sky
But wings can heal and often do.
This is the hope I offer you.

very pretty and eloquently stated!!
no limits. just edges. - Jackson Pollack

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