Oceans of Love

[CatieRose]

As I was walking through the sands of time,
dark storms were raging in my haggard soul.
The waves broke hard, with beauty so sublime,
their sprays were whispering of more to know.
Then, I was picking shells along the way
that tide had left there just beyond the bluff;
I thought to save them for a rainy day, yet,
somehow, knew that they were not enough.
I heard the message clearly, "Go within!
Use all your senses for becoming whole;
drink from My water, never thirst again!"
His ebb and flow touched deep into my soul.

From oceans filled with love by God above,
I was drenched in its spray, washed in His love.

[bags123]

Excellent Catie,....

[CatieRose]

I know the Iambics are off in the last line, maybe the last two lines, yet... I was careful in what I wanted it to say. Thanks for commenting. hugs, Catie :)

[bags123]

Hey,..I'm not much of a critic. I either like something or don't. This showed the work you put into it. I applaud you for it. It's a rare thing these days.

[DarleneG]

Catie It's a beautiful poem. And I loved the last two lines!