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Re: The Song

Post by Debbie » Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:46 pm

What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1 :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :hugs:
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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:32 pm

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Re: The Song

Post by bags123 » Fri Nov 30, 2012 6:19 am

Wow,...how did I miss this oldie? Very lyrical piece my friend. Lovely meter, thoughts well expressed, good use of rhyme. Normally, you've written in more of a free verse type of style. Haven't you? :cheers:
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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Sat Dec 01, 2012 11:03 am

bags123 wrote:Wow,...how did I miss this oldie? Very lyrical piece my friend. Lovely meter, thoughts well expressed, good use of rhyme. Normally, you've written in more of a free verse type of style. Haven't you? :cheers:
Appreciate your comments, my friend. I like to mix things up poetically and lyrically :cheers:
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Re: The Song

Post by Jade » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:25 pm

I would have given Eternum one of those bages!
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Re: The Song

Post by Debbie » Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:19 am

Debbie wrote:What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1 :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :hugs:
I find it quite exciting to be able to read these poems of yours ET and find such new meaning ,,and looking back it is obvious I found even different meaning in this one a while back. I always did enjoy your writing's ET....a talent born in you for sure. :thewave: :angel:
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Re: The Song

Post by Bruno » Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:21 pm

Beautiful lyrics which only a poet can write! Don't know how I missed it except that I don't often look in this forum not being particularly spiritual which I admit is often my loss. :book:

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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:13 pm

Jade wrote:I would have given Eternum one of those bages!
A bagel or a badge?

If it's a bagel, can I have with cold smoked salmon and some cream cheese?

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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:14 pm

Debbie wrote:
Debbie wrote:What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1 :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :hugs:
I find it quite exciting to be able to read these poems of yours ET and find such new meaning ,,and looking back it is obvious I found even different meaning in this one a while back. I always did enjoy your writing's ET....a talent born in you for sure. :thewave: :angel:
Thanque my dear. :hearts:
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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:16 pm

Bruno wrote:Beautiful lyrics which only a poet can write! Don't know how I missed it except that I don't often look in this forum not being particularly spiritual which I admit is often my loss. :book:

If you understand beauty then you are as spiritual as anyone...in my estimation.

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Re: The Song

Post by Jade » Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:50 pm

No its a badge for the talented! Feel special! lol

and yea, hey, somebody get Eternum a bagel while you're at it. :wink: :mrgreen:
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Re: The Song

Post by heinzs » Mon Dec 10, 2012 9:30 pm

There are fresh bagels in the pantry, he can get his own. The shmeer is in the fridge.
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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:17 am

I just put a sixer of shmeer in the fridge and replaced the bagels with some rolls and cold smoked lox along with some local made cream cheese, Also some thin sliced prosciutto ham to wrap the fresh cooked shrimp in and some California avocado sushi rolls and a big fat dill pickle for a chaser.

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Re: The Song

Post by kuperian4ever » Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:21 pm

I've read this before when
you posted it on the
Poetrypages.com group
on Facebook. Loved it
then and I still love it
Now. Very nice!!
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Re: The Song

Post by Eternum 1 » Sat Dec 28, 2013 11:17 am

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