A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
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- jeannerené
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
Gordy...
I know that I have read your other Study in Perspectives ... but I don't think I ever read this one ....
Well told ... and expressed with compassion....
I'm glad I got a chance to read it ...........
I know that I have read your other Study in Perspectives ... but I don't think I ever read this one ....
Well told ... and expressed with compassion....
I'm glad I got a chance to read it ...........
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
i lost the # 2 poem it was called gold and garbage..........i will have to rewrite it some time........
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
- sojourner
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
Get to work on that!
1 and 3 are really impressive in their weight and presence. I'd love to read the bridge!
1 and 3 are really impressive in their weight and presence. I'd love to read the bridge!
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- nekot
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
sojourner wrote:Get to work on that!
1 and 3 are really impressive in their weight and presence. I'd love to read the bridge!
If I become an architect, can I read bridges too?
Bridges give interesting perspectives.
(For the 2nd time this morning Nekot )
OFF TOPIC!!
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
nekot says "If I become an architect, can I read bridges too?"
you can also do it if you become a dentist
you can also do it if you become a dentist
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
- nekot
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
Well Soj is an architect I think.gordy wrote:nekot says "If I become an architect, can I read bridges too?"
you can also do it if you become a dentist
Is there a dentist in the house?
(Look..now...I'm diverting the poem again...so I'll stop now!!! )
It's a excellent poem Gordy....even without the bridge.
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
belated thanks
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
this is beautiful my friend even to an unbeliever like me
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
thank you poeticpiers
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
... I have read this quite a few times now. It strikes a little too close to home to really comment objectively on it. All I can say is this is a very powerful piece of writing.
Jady
Jady
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
thank you
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
Red letter A for "Amen!"
Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)
thx
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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