If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

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If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

Post by gordy » Thu Feb 12, 2004 7:30 am

She gives me her best grin
When she walks in
To the room

My heart nearly melts within
As I squeeze her close
To my chest

And in that brief, forever moment
I realize something about God
And His gift

Being a father I could never
Give up either
One

But as I hug my daughter
I realize why He had to
Sacrifice His Son

There is no way, not even God
Could've watched as nails
Pierced

Soft, white hands that he had held
Had God had a daughter
I think

None of us would have been redeemed
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Post by His Barbie Doll » Thu Feb 12, 2004 7:55 am

Ya know... that's a good point... what if God had, had a daughter instead... would his purpose and will still be served?

Very intriguing and thougt provoking write gordy!!! :bow:

A whole lot of awesomeness!!! :mrgreen:

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Post by Duchess » Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:25 am

:bump: what my sister said!

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Re: If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

Post by lpollsnoop » Mon Dec 20, 2004 5:38 pm

Hi Gordy
Your heartfelt love and devotion to your daughter comes through
powerfully in this piece.

As the father of a son and daughter I can relate to your emotional attachment to your offspring.

Can you share your realization as to why g-d had to
sacrifice his son?

But as I hug my daughter
I realize why He had to
Sacrifice His Son
Michael in Brooklyn

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Post by gordy » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:35 am

for my sins......for all our sins.......so i can be together forever with my daughter and whole family.........thanks for your kind words :mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Post by Debbie » Wed Dec 07, 2005 12:35 pm

This sent shivers through me and at the same time gave me warmth..and yet tears...well spoken Gordy...indeed spledid piece.. :bow: :bow:
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Re: If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

Post by Debbie » Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:23 pm

Nice to read this one once again Gordy... :thumbsup:
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Re: If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

Post by gordy » Thu Oct 30, 2008 3:41 am

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: If Ribbons And Bows, Who Knows?

Post by gordy » Thu Jan 09, 2014 4:58 pm

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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