My Father's Nature
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My Father's Nature
As the days shimmering sunlight
Brushes softly 'cross my brow
The autumn evening enters
As a dusky whisper
Sighing sweetly, softly, saying simply
"Child, lay down now."
This days destined ordained ending
Slowly slips shadows up under my chin
As if the moon was sent
By God (or maybe my mom)
To give me a goodnite kiss
And tightly tuck me in
I have a peaceful drifting dozing feeling
As nature holds me, snugly-safe and sound
Faintly I hear a lone coyote's
Nightly howlallujah
A predators primative praise
Prayerfully rising Heaven bound
Realizing, as nature gloriously surrounds me
That no matter how maternal it may feel,
While it may be motherly
Both in name and nurture,
In truth, it's my Fathers nature
Mother nature does reveal
Brushes softly 'cross my brow
The autumn evening enters
As a dusky whisper
Sighing sweetly, softly, saying simply
"Child, lay down now."
This days destined ordained ending
Slowly slips shadows up under my chin
As if the moon was sent
By God (or maybe my mom)
To give me a goodnite kiss
And tightly tuck me in
I have a peaceful drifting dozing feeling
As nature holds me, snugly-safe and sound
Faintly I hear a lone coyote's
Nightly howlallujah
A predators primative praise
Prayerfully rising Heaven bound
Realizing, as nature gloriously surrounds me
That no matter how maternal it may feel,
While it may be motherly
Both in name and nurture,
In truth, it's my Fathers nature
Mother nature does reveal
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Rae Of Sunshine
Posted: 29 Nov 2003 01:10:pm
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This poem is simply wonderful. It was effortless to be inside this poem, to visually see it and feel it as well. The coyote's call was very clever. Rae
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Truly enjoyed reading... you set a wonderful mood... the twist/insight of the last verse is a wonderful conclusion.
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... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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Re: My Father's Nature
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: My Father's Nature
I really enjoyed this poem Gordy gotta love the way you had those wolves praise the Lord..so unique you are dear friend and brother
Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
Re: My Father's Nature
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: My Father's Nature
welcome
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: My Father's Nature
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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