Natural Perspective

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soular
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Natural Perspective

Post by soular » Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:33 pm

No uncommon sense
if not for common

Fixed yet always in flux
Ephemeral, also eternal

All there is except common
No, not always so, and so...

Uniquely figured prism beams
Faces of myriad expressions

Art does mean imitation
of nature - Nature itself!

Unnatural, non-natural, artificial?
Can they all be of Nature?

Infinite variations of interpretations
An uncountable natural perspective

Peace

Everything changes
and nothing stays

It's not a concept,
the truth

Nothing seems
changing?

Only when they are gone
Peace, or anything else make you realize
how precious they are

Peace is really something
in the ever changing world
Last edited by soular on Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Natural Perspective

Post by Gizmo » Thu Sep 21, 2017 2:00 am

I like the juxtapositions of positive/negative thoughts. I can see where this could be extended to a larger piece.
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Re: Natural Perspective

Post by soular » Thu Sep 21, 2017 5:57 am

Thanks much for comment, Gizmo. Rereading this made me want to make changes but I decided to leave as is.

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