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soular
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Post by soular » Tue Mar 24, 2015 8:21 am

When it comes to poetry
words are mere means

Behind each word
hide feelings, indescribable

When it comes to life
everything is mere means

What can be sensed and cannot
come alive, together as one

What is solid can be shattered
while what is soft melts

And for whatever else, I pray
without a word, thankfully

Dream (how abstract)

Sit still
To be the earth

Flow to the sea
Into the universe

It's from you
All that you see

Feeling together
All that you will be

Moving/being moved
Always in motion

Sit still
To be the earth

Flow to the sea
Into the universe

Once and ever.

Straight up to the sky,
staring

Standing at the crossroads,
at the sun

Looking forward,
heading for infinity

Time is eternal
Feels timeless

For good
As ever

Re: To be/love - Lyrics

Every moment
is a record
if I'm with you
Happier
than it can ever be

Just a feeling
sure as the sunrise
like the Sun
you shine
eternally

You are
everywhere I look

With eyes
opened or closed

My angel
you're flying out of reach

Out of my mind
I'll be there

It's just a matter of
timelessness

No reason can
only be found
in this,
dreams come true

Every moment
is a record
if I'm with you
Happier
than it can ever be

Just a feeling
sure as the sunrise
like the Sun
you shine
eternally

@ SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/brain-beach/to-belove-soular
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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by kimmyjean » Thu Mar 26, 2015 5:42 pm

Nice...been reading you for a long time and never knew about the music....sound good...the two songs I listened to were very mellow and i enjoyed them...

:thewave:

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Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis
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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by soular » Thu Mar 26, 2015 6:31 pm

Thanks much for your reading, commenting, and listening! :bow:

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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by bags123 » Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:41 am

Defintely sounds good read with a down beat. Jah mon. Respect. :cool:
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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by soular » Thu Apr 02, 2015 8:05 am

Thanks much, bags. I hope you're feeling irie. :grin:

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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by bags123 » Thu Apr 02, 2015 8:06 am

Always irie my friend. Always irie. :grin:
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Re: Dream (how abstract)

Post by soular » Thu Apr 02, 2015 8:33 am

:thumbsup:

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