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kimmyjean
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Exsitence

Post by kimmyjean » Fri May 23, 2014 6:31 pm

Existence


Inhale nighttime’s intoxication
Hidden within layers
Of brusque air
Entrancing your senses…
Enthralling your mind…

Whispering voices
Calling in a night
I am yours…
You are mine…
Let’s dance
Upon evenings sublime

Gasp within grasp
Tantalizing curiosity
Exposing inner desire
Inside surreal dreams
Upon a midnight hour

Chirping tones echo
Playing harmonies
Soothingly back and forth
Beckoning to a call
Upon melodies bliss

Moon rays caress
Upon luminous skin
Enlightening a soul
Hidden within
Misting passageways

Hues of ebony cobalt and wine
Stroke altruistic collections
Upon a murmurs essence
Shimmering a sparkle
Inside our eyes

Bend down
Upon our knees
Searching for meaning
Inside lunar reflections
Of ordinary lies

Revolve away from sins
As lust and desire culminate
Upon back dropped mountains
Flowing in rivers
Of secret passion

Seeking veils of originality
Within our commonality
Believing our pre-eminence
Within our inadequacy
Choices breeding consequences
Within atonement

Tears fall for humanity
As layers of night transcend
Truth within manifestation
Denial of our baser side
Darkness becomes our friend

Humanity within
Complete calamity
Hypocrisy pillaging
As we breakdown
…A soul in disarray

Spirits bond to oceans
Waves pulsating
With unending time
Ebb and flow fueling life
Inside deaths paradox

Question authority
Search for truth
WE are pawns
In a diversion
Fighting for our existence
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Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis
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Re: Exsitence

Post by heinzs » Sat May 24, 2014 3:56 pm

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Re: Exsitence

Post by DarleneG » Sun Jun 01, 2014 11:28 am

:hello: Thanks for sharing your poem. :book:
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Re: Exsitence

Post by kimmyjean » Sat Jun 07, 2014 10:58 am

Thanks for taking the time to reply

Best

KJ
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Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis
http://kjpoetryemporium.org/index.html


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Re: Exsitence

Post by Eternum 1 » Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:16 pm

We are indeed "seeking veils of originality within our commonality". A poet when seeking seeks with every sense while the mundane lack the curiosity to seek beyond what they have been taught to see.

You often tap into what's veiled to others and that's what makes you a original.

Nice to read you again.

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Re: Exsitence

Post by kimmyjean » Sat Aug 16, 2014 6:58 pm

Thanks as always appreciate your words

Love and peace
Kimmy
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Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis
http://kjpoetryemporium.org/index.html


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