I sing the song of the shepherd...

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FirestoneFeinberg
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I sing the song of the shepherd...

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Sat Feb 01, 2014 12:06 pm




I sing the song of the shepherd --
As evening shades the hill --
Though flock I've not nor even flute --
To play the peaceful stillness
That surges from the valley
And wanders from the sky --
That tells the starry self -- the truth --
Yet questions never why.



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Re: I sing the song of the shepherd...

Post by DarleneG » Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:52 am

Oh, how beautifully said! And the stillness you mention, I believe is the presence of God we all experience in private moments. :thumbsup:
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Re: I sing the song of the shepherd...

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:22 am

DarleneG wrote:Oh, how beautifully said! And the stillness you mention, I believe is the presence of God we all experience in private moments. :thumbsup:
Thank you so much Darlene. I believe you are right. Hope you are well. Sincerely, David
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