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Two Way Street

Post by bags123 » Mon Jul 22, 2013 10:25 am

Two Way Street

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of an eternal round that starts here, now, and then.
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.

It's a fortunate state of events we call life
and despite all the hunger, despair, pain, and strife
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

But I must say the journey's been super thus far
It's been fun while it's lasted, at times quite bizarre
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of something once started, that was left yet again
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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Re: Two Way Street

Post by LadySaturn » Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:46 am

If you put some music to this you might just have a song, Bagsy boy. :hello:

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Re: Two Way Street

Post by Eternum 1 » Wed Jul 24, 2013 5:34 pm

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Re: Two Way Street

Post by audiofool » Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:04 am

A good one, per usual. :grin:

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Re: Two Way Street

Post by bags123 » Sun Jul 28, 2013 6:40 am

Thanks everyone. :hello:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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Re: Two Way Street

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Mon Jul 29, 2013 7:52 am

bags123 wrote:Two Way Street

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of an eternal round that starts here, now, and then.
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.

It's a fortunate state of events we call life
and despite all the hunger, despair, pain, and strife
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

But I must say the journey's been super thus far
It's been fun while it's lasted, at times quite bizarre
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of something once started, that was left yet again
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.
I think I've done both in my time... and sometimes I just stand still and don't know what to do. This is a fine and uplifting poem. You are going. Thanks. David
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Re: Two Way Street

Post by bags123 » Tue Jul 30, 2013 8:36 am

Thanks David. I've found standing still only exacerbates the issues. :mrgreen: :hello:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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