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poeticpiers reborn
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It could be worse

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:34 pm

It could be worse.

Old age is catching up with me.
I have no choice I can’t deny.
I must accept I can’t rely.
Upon my short term memory.

This is the harsh reality
My memory’s a casualty.
Beyond repair apparently.
A personal catastrophe.

But life goes on and so must I
Although I know I can’t defy
what fate decrees.I will still try.
Nobody knows the reason why.

We lose our short term memories.
Though there are many theories

Friday, 25 January 2013

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Re: It could be worse

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:41 pm

poeticpiers reborn wrote:It could be worse.

Old age is catching up with me.
I have no choice I can’t deny.
I must accept I can’t rely.
Upon my short term memory.

This is the harsh reality
My memory’s a casualty.
Beyond repair apparently.
A personal catastrophe.

But life goes on and so must I
Although I know I can’t defy
what fate decrees.I will still try.


Nobody knows the reason why.

We lose our short term memories.
Though there are many theories

Friday, 25 January 2013
This is a very cool poem. Me -- even when I was young I had little short term memory -- and long term memory: forget it. Well my wife remembers for both of us. Love your poem. --David
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Re: It could be worse

Post by bags123 » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:05 am

Hi Ivor,
Something I can definitley relate to. I do alot of driving in my job. The other day I was cruising down the NYS Thruway,..now mind you,..in the USA all Interstate Thruways look much the same,...and it took me at least 10 seconds to 1: Remember where I was going, and 2: Remember where I was. :mrgreen:
It's all good though. Sometimes it's better that way. :thewave:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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