Silence of the Lambs

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Silence of the Lambs

Post by Bruno » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:55 am

Where among the mystery spaces
Lie the laws to perfect our state
Even if in other places
We reemerge to share past fate?

Why should my life reiterate
To redeem its course of error?
Time creates and obliterates
An unfolding felt as terror.

Passing strange that my life should be
Another loop to make things right!
I can't recall a prior me
Less perfect than I am tonight.
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Re: Silence of the Lambs

Post by bags123 » Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:27 am

I can't recall a prior me
Less perfect than I am tonight.
:cheers: Perfect ending my friend. May we all pass as smoothly.
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Re: Silence of the Lambs

Post by poeticpiers » Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:32 pm

Perhaps the erasure of past lives is a blessing my friend Would you want to remember being a concentration camp guard
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