Too Little, Too Much (It's Perfect when It's Moderate)

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Too Little, Too Much (It's Perfect when It's Moderate)

Post by Hiyu » Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:14 am

Too Little, Too Much

you'd never know how strong you are
or it's that the thing that you hold
would be so delicate

you'd never know the strength you have
or the walls you want to break
is unbreakable...

tell me now, how the hell i'd know...

*too much is a poison,
too little is a sin
too tight kills the chick,
too loose lets it walk away
too little
or too much,
would i find any other way?
it's perfect when it's moderate...

try,
to get the best of both worlds
cry,
is life never a faiy tale?
if limits like fears would just be illusions
are dreams and goals just as nonsensical?

you'd sometimes ask is there a God?
you'd often ask where are your friends?
faith can save this troubled soul
it lurks deep within it all...

so tell me now, how the hell i'd know...

**fall in love
live your dreams
but always know
who you really are because...

*too much is a poison,
too little is a sin
too tight kills the chick,
too loose lets it walk away
too little
or too much,
would i find any other way?
it's perfect when it's moderate...
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: Too Little, Too Much (It's Perfect when It's Moderate)

Post by poeticpiers » Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:28 am

Moderation in all things,follow always the middlepath. Extremes are never healthy
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Re: Too Little, Too Much (It's Perfect when It's Moderate)

Post by Hiyu » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:03 am

it's hard to see whether if it is moderate or not. that's why it's hard or almost impossible to be perfect.
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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