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Old Poet
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Artists

Post by Old Poet » Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:36 pm

Artists

She paints with oils
and water too
on taut canvas
with flat and stroke brushes
guided by her mind's eye.

He paints with his thoughts
and dreams too
with nimble keystrokes
on a flat screen
guided by his heart's eye.

She and he are artists,
they both see things,
not as they are,
but as they should be
or could be, by and by.
"I'm learning to fly,
but I ain't got wings.
Coming down,
is the hardest thing." - Tom Petty

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Re: Artists

Post by LostNight » Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:38 pm

very nice...
The wheels of time
how ever slow
speeds up
as we grow

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So much be said
with so few words

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Re: Artists

Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:07 am

No truer words spoken, OP. The artist definitely views the world from a should be/could be stance, though sometimes presenting stark reality in all it's brutal horror presents the viewer with more to ponder on.

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Re: Artists

Post by Old Poet » Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:20 pm

Right on, corpulent one. "Elmer Gantry" by Sinclair Lewis and "The Jungle" by Upton Sinclair serve as specifically altruistic examples of your point. But arguably the best poetic example is "The Lie" by Sir Walter Raleigh.
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but I ain't got wings.
Coming down,
is the hardest thing." - Tom Petty

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