We're learning to make fire
out of water and sky
We’re daring the impossible
waving death goodbye
We’re living the extremes
diving into disaster
We’re tearing apart family’s
dissolving joyous laughter
We’re mastering the art of stealth
telling lie after lie
We’re learning to make fire
out of water and sky
Learning To Make Fire
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Autoprune 12 months.
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Autoprune 12 months.
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Re: Learning To Make Fire
Nice. Nice rhythms. I saw a few cool lines in there. Good job.
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