Learning To Make Fire

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Black Star Shine
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Learning To Make Fire

Post by Black Star Shine » Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:47 pm

We're learning to make fire
out of water and sky
We’re daring the impossible
waving death goodbye
We’re living the extremes
diving into disaster
We’re tearing apart family’s
dissolving joyous laughter
We’re mastering the art of stealth
telling lie after lie
We’re learning to make fire
out of water and sky

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Re: Learning To Make Fire

Post by Floetry Spades » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:42 pm

Nice. Nice rhythms. I saw a few cool lines in there. Good job.
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Re: Learning To Make Fire

Post by wadley gurl » Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:42 am

:hearts: :thewave:
Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind
-Helena-
A Midsummer night's dream

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