Out-Sourcing Your Praise

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Re: Out-Sourcing Your Praise

Post by gordy » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:09 am

after some (well deserved) constructive critiscism in this thread by mr bags i decided to give this one a rewrite, i have posted the change along with a slight change to the title, let me know what you think of it.......thanks :thumbsup:

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Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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