Floating Dreams

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Floating Dreams

Post by kimmyjean » Mon Nov 13, 2017 7:28 pm

She moves in silence
Pirouetting upon sinuous waters
Ascending throughout time
Fragmented from an ancient universe

Lords of elemental power
Orbit her way
Traveling from Temples of Illusion
Where ancient forests bow down
Into a cosmic entity

Fire dances around her form
Wind cradles her within
As cascading droplets
Melt her into the terrain

The wolf and the dragon
Pay tribute within a
Sovereignty of domination
Out skirting the mind
A call to brotherhood

Bridges form above waterfalls
Eroding away tears
Vanished in a creation
Of floating Dreams

Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis

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Re: Floating Dreams

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:33 pm

The imagery is very strong and does invoke a sensation of that final "floating dream".

Thanks for posting, Kimmy! :cool:
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