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Woohoo success! I'm glad you liked it, I hold your opinion quite highly =)

Hahaha oh my gosh, it's been some years since I've done this, I think I've fixed it. Of course if I've miscounted again, I'm going to blame it on the late hour. I saw where my mistakes were and I had to change some of the words. Smiling never comes now. Beautiful, your fallen eyes hold no love for t...

Lmao this thread is too funny! I am so sad, I though I was a true bacon lover. Yet, it seems that there are many types of bacon I've never tried. Pemeal I've never even heard of and I wasn't aware that England had a different (supposedly superior) form either. Probably their pigs are leaner and in b...

Aha I've reworked this one to be an actual haiku now or senryu i guess hah. Ever helpful you are heinzs.

My bittersweet Moon
Bouncing your bewitching beams
Soundless as night air

Thanks for the tip about the "So what is haiku anyways?" thread, I found it to be very helpful. I also checked out the forum explaining all the different types of form poetry which were also very informative. So without further ado... my first attempt at a rictameter! Smiling never happens now. Beau...

Ah My Bittersweet Moon
Drearily Bouncing Bewitching Beams
Soundless in Evenings Air

I'm not terribly familiar with any form poetry. Is this a haiku??

Mos t of us have been here at least once. Stay strong and look to the sky. Nice poem, I especially love the last line "I am lost in love with you". It gives the feeling of hopelessness you feel when going through something like that.

My bittersweet Moon
Bouncing your bewitching beams
Soundless as night air


Ha! I thought I had edited this one, turns out the page must have froze or something because it was the same as before!

NOW it's a haiku

It inspires such a feeling of longing. I found myself repeatingit in my head throughout the day.

Good morning restless heart.
Hello again.
Quiet your fluttering rhyme.
The sweetest harmonies await.

Brilliant they dance
in the rhapsody
of his cerulean eyes.

This is really beautiful

Great read.

I think we've all been there before. It may not have ended up so perfect for everyone, but it's nice to see it put into words.
God one

I liked that a lot. I really needed to smile.

You look at me, with once familiar eyes. The color of liquid amber has changed. Replaced by a dark brooding brown. The gentle pools, the windows to your soul are now raging. Violent, the turbulence waxing, beneath the confusion. I stare. Watching the sunlight glance off the lashes I have kissed a th...

I liked it! Reminds me of Beowulf a bit, except that I didn't like that story ^_^