Poetry Pages

wow, powerful and exciting poetry here!! I love the title. good work.

luv Gingy x

lol u know how you feel, I quite often wish I was talented in the arts so as to take out my frusrations on something like this. Still, that's what poetry is for as well, eh? lol.

Luvs Gingy xx

OO thank you moonflower and ven!! I was starting to think that this was going to become a bottom of the basket one!! lol.

Luv Gingy x

wow, powerful imagery!! this from personal experience at all?! if so, hope you relieve yourself of this anger soon!

luvs Gingy xx

ah BB, my friend!! As usual you entice me with your thought provoking poetry, and this poem sent my mind in all kinds of dithering fantasies!! lol. anyways, yer, back to reality, great write and will look out for the sequel!!

Luvs Gingy xx

nice write, but it finish a bit too quickly in my opinion, i think you could maybe add another stanza or two in there between the last and the second to last stanza, mayb describing the man that you so want to kill?!

Suggestions is all!!:)

Luv Gingy x

Don't cut their hair short or change their style Leave them as they are They're fine for a while Their friends are fine Their schoolwork's great Leave them as they are You're their best mate Don't give them make-up To slap on their face Leave them as they are Every natural trace Don't tell them thei...

brilliant, absolutely fab! what a poem, a mixed message with comedy and serious aspects. very skillful!

luv gingy x

hehe, moonflower, I comepletly forgot I had this post, thank you so much for bringing it back to the top of the board!!

luvs Gingy xx

short n sweet, he he i always say that!! lol. loved it!
Gingy x

aww this one is so cute!

aww lovely!!

Gingy x

Again BB, wonderful poetry, noone need cut you any slack, this was a great piece!! Don't doubt yourself so quickly!!

Luvs Gingy x

hey again my friend!! This piece is smashing. I too believe you have a great passion and promise in your work. Still a huge fan hunni!! lol.

Look forward to reading some more!!

Luvs Gingy x

hey, I'd never read this before and I am glad you posted it in for us. I really like it!

Gingy x