The imagery is very strong and does invoke a sensation of that final "floating dream".
Thanks for posting, Kimmy!
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- Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:33 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Floating Dreams
- Replies: 2
- Views: 6413
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:30 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Nice to meet you
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6687
Re: Nice to meet you
In facing ourselves we must each face our mortality. That's not easy to do.
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:29 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Looking to improve this song for an excericise
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11550
- Mon Nov 13, 2017 9:14 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Looking to improve this song for an excericise
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11550
Re: Looking to improve this song for an excericise
I don't see where this needs improvement. Looks good and complete as is.
- Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:28 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Holograms
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6018
Re: Holograms
I often feel I am like a hologram being controlled by someone else and not truly me. Thanks!
- Fri Nov 10, 2017 12:16 am
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8360
Re: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)
I like it
- Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:51 pm
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: Sleep Apnea (Divine Intervention)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8360
- Sun Nov 05, 2017 8:06 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Saturn's Manifesto: Scene Two
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3632
- Sat Nov 04, 2017 12:10 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Last Word
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7323
- Sat Nov 04, 2017 12:09 am
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: In Between Years
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6473
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 12:31 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: WHY?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4428
Re: WHY?
Thanks for posting, Dema!
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 12:50 am
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: In Between Years
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6473
Re: In Between Years
I want to thank you for your stalwart loyalty to the PoetryPages. So many of our familia have wandered away. I'm trying to get them to check in by sending out email pleas, but so far I'm only able to get them as far as our Facebook page... and that's no small feat. Thank you, thank you for posting y...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 8:08 pm
- Forum: Poeticpiers Master of Form
- Topic: Secret Dreams.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 9325
Re: Secret Dreams.
Here's a poem by Ivor from the obit: Letting Go. A Poem by Poeticpiers " rhyming quatrains " Letting Go. She sits asleep her wig askew. She care no more what people think And lives again the days she knew The flying years gone in a blink. She’s just a fresh young girl again. Before she wed beforse s...
- Mon Oct 23, 2017 12:08 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Peace
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4079
Re: Peace
Very Zen...
- Tue Oct 17, 2017 8:46 am
- Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
- Topic: Paradise
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6887
Re: Paradise
Yes, we each contain within ourselves our own paradise. Most of us need help in finding it, though.