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FirestoneFeinberg

Does Lenny say quite WHEN that'll be? Thanks for your comment, sir. Hope all's well. --David

FirestoneFeinberg

b’’h
10/12/12

AMERICA WAS

America was —
Or so I thought —
But maybe

I was too
Young
To know.

Now I see
What is not.
There are holes

Everywhere.

FirestoneFeinberg

There's a lot of feeling -- and truth -- in your words. I have been on the same bridge. All I could do was wait... A fine poem, Darlene. --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Thank you dear Darlene for your ever strong support and warm words. Have a great day! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

heinzs wrote:My muse takes more vacations than I do... must be a "muse" thing.

Certainly -- then -- all we have to do is reduce the number of 'vacation days' these neglectful muses receive. We'll fix 'em, what? A-musing comment: thanks! --D

FirestoneFeinberg

I HAVE THE NEED TO WRITE

I have the need to write —
But not the inspiration —
My muse is out of sight —
She must be on vacation.

FirestoneFeinberg

Divine, Darlene, just Divine. I love the brevity. Makes it so easy for me to read. You wrote a beautiful poem here. Thanks for your bright vision! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Dear poeticpiers reborn, Thank you for your wonderful verse-comment. You sing -- not necessary to carry a tune -- I would stay in the concert hall. You have something -- somethings -- to sing about! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Travis that is one of most beautiful 'comments' I have ever gotten. I am very very touched. I can't believe anyone would do such a thing for me: for once I've no words. But. THANK YOU!

FirestoneFeinberg

Thanks for commenting, Bags! You're absolutely right. Give me a simple tune -- over a symphony -- any time -- it's a pleasure -- and a treasure -- to have. --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Thanks so much Darlene for your warm comment. Yes -- I guess you're right; if I'm singing I must be 'the h-word' (happy). Hope all is well with you and yours! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Thanks Carol! I'm glad you like this poem and that it brought good associations to mind. Thank you for your kind wishes re my pneumonia; it's all over, thank G-d. Have a wonderful 'today!' --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Thanks, Nekot! That's the best compliment you can give me! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

This is wonderful! --David

FirestoneFeinberg

Excellent! Unusual! Totally original! --David

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