Excellent beginning. Very reminiscent of Alice Norton's Witch World series. I can see quite a novel developing from this, if this is just the prologue@
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- Wed Feb 12, 2003 11:20 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: My newest story, just like to try out the prologue on ya...
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1538
- Sat Feb 01, 2003 4:26 pm
- Forum: In Tribute
- Topic: Fallen Heroes
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5521
Fallen Heros
Columbia falls
memories forevermore
heavenly angels
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memories forevermore
heavenly angels
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- Wed Jan 22, 2003 5:26 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Lost in Paradise (in three parts)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 7633
Lost in Paradise (in three parts)
Lost in Paradise part 1: Discovery Where am I? The barren terrain stretches to the horizon - a treeless desert, strewn with rocks flicked at random from the Gods' game of tiddlywinks. The sky blood red - the sun hidden from view just below vision's edge. Perpetual dawn - or is it dusk? It matters n...
- Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:23 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Time To Fly
- Replies: 17
- Views: 24664
Time To Fly
And if you should crash and burn, rise up like the legendary Phoenix to reclaim your birthright!
Sending you all my "good vibes".
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Sending you all my "good vibes".
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- Sat Jan 18, 2003 3:21 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Time To Fly
- Replies: 17
- Views: 24664
Time To Fly
Fly straight and true, Ravyn! Join the Falcon and soar the heavens' delight.
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- Fri Jan 17, 2003 2:39 am
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Outcast
- Replies: 15
- Views: 10685
Outcast
Gotta pass through the shadows to reach the light.
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- Tue Jan 14, 2003 11:54 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Pavlov's Dawgs (Razing your children)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 15719
Pavlov's Dawgs (Razing your children)
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- Mon Jan 13, 2003 5:40 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Oh Hell!
- Replies: 18
- Views: 20787
Oh Hell!
Sorry, the dogs ate it already.
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- Mon Jan 13, 2003 1:48 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: San Rafael Archangel
- Replies: 6
- Views: 6132
San Rafael Archangel
I thought I had posted this last July but can't find it... so here it is. San Rafael Archangel The cool of the evening draws nigh as sun's orb sinks beyond the mount. Brightly silhouetted dark on gold clear curves outline rocky majesty. Each tree stands alone, cardboard cutout against pink and blue ...
- Mon Jan 06, 2003 11:22 pm
- Forum: In Tribute
- Topic: Christmas for Benjamin
- Replies: 23
- Views: 23033
Christmas for Benjamin
Thanks Gordy. Do that!
Yes, Bags... I suspect they are!
Yes, Bags... I suspect they are!
- Mon Jan 06, 2003 12:18 am
- Forum: In Tribute
- Topic: Christmas for Benjamin
- Replies: 23
- Views: 23033
Christmas for Benjamin
This makes the 21st Christmas since my son, Benjamin, passed on. I like to commemorate him each year. Twenty one empty stockings unneeded reminders vacant arms groping for a touch your heartbeat next to mine brown eyes sparkling ageless, timeless I have missed you, and will to the end of my days. Me...
- Sun Dec 29, 2002 10:30 pm
- Forum: Funny Business
- Topic: King Procrastinator
- Replies: 105
- Views: 108342
King Procrastinator
In that case, I'll read it tomorrow, Gordy... after you've finished it. Or maybe the day after...
- Fri Dec 20, 2002 1:42 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Secret World (Chapter Three)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3579
Secret World (Chapter Three)
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- Tue Dec 17, 2002 10:08 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Secret World (chapter two)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2903
Secret World (chapter two)
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Christmas shopping.
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Christmas shopping.
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- Fri Dec 13, 2002 10:47 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Secret World (chapter one)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3057
Secret World (chapter one)
It's a really great beginning to a longer story, even a novel. I was surprised by the twist to vampirism, I was prepared for date-rape. You need to run this through a spell checker, and there are some minor areas that need band-aid repair, but that's up to an editor to check for you. Congrats! Very ...