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- Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:59 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: A widows Woes.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1177
Re: A widows Woes.
This is a majestic poem. It squarely faces the hard hard truth of widowhood -- the emptiness, the sorrow, the endless pain. I have the feeling that you are the son -- or perhaps writing from a close perspectve. It is a sad situation. What grabs me is that this poem is not a plea for sympathy; it as...
- Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:29 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: IF BE YOUR WILL TO WIN THE GAME
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1256
Re: IF BE YOUR WILL TO WIN THE GAME
The university of life is the finest of all. No diplomas no degrees just good teaching by experience Dear poeticpiers reborn, Thanks again for reading my poem and for taking the time and effort to write. I am glad you understood the poem; sometimes my writing is so abstruse that even I can't unders...
- Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:18 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2368
Re: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
Your final line says it all Thank you, poeticpiers reborn, for your positive comment: I have to admit that that last line really worked.... but at least I can't take conscious credit for it . It just flew out of Somewhere -- to my wonder and amazement. I appreciate very much your kindness and gener...
- Fri Dec 09, 2011 1:49 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: IF BE YOUR WILL TO WIN THE GAME
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1256
IF BE YOUR WILL TO WIN THE GAME
If be your will to win the game,
Walk bold beyond taut rules —
Go There, where secret strategy
The Ones most schools call fools.
No game is life — tho’ like — some say —
Goal both to all Opponents fool:
Academy — yields — empty-hand —
Reality — wields — Tool.
- Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:58 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2368
Re: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
Dear HEINZS -- Sorry this not in chronological order... Still trying to get used to the form of the 'forum.' I'm not a natural wiz when it comes to computers. Appreciate your comments and warm smileys. About the style: I understand. The trouble with me -- or ONE of the troubles with me -- in any ar...
- Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:41 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2368
Re: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
Thanks, bags123, for reading and commenting. I very much appreciate your kindness and generosity, and, of course, I am thrilled that you like the poem. AND: congratulations on being Poet of the Month in March!! --David -- FF
- Wed Dec 07, 2011 6:41 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2368
OLD AGE BRINGS NEITHER WISDOM NOR CLARITY
Old age brings neither wisdom nor clarity Of reasons For. It only adds to the Confusion manifest since all Thens. A Slow killer Of — it is. No remedy Can ease the pain nor make for again. To see Oneself disintegrate is all right. What Choice is there — unless you can die — tho’ shut The windows of ...
- Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:48 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Dreams Discovered
- Replies: 13
- Views: 9642
Re: Dreams Discovered
Great poem! Easy to read. Easy to understand. Universal subject. I dig. -- David
- Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:03 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Positive Thoughts
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4278
Re: Positive Thoughts
COOL!
- Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:01 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Garden
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5884
Re: Garden
Imaginative. Creative. Great Rhythm. --FF
- Fri Dec 02, 2011 6:57 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: The Last Goodbye
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3784
Re: The Last Goodbye
Beautiful. Life-affirming. Filled with love. --FF
- Fri Dec 02, 2011 6:44 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: THIS IS THE TIME OF NIGHT
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4742
THIS IS THE TIME OF NIGHT
This is the time of night
When I think about the day
It’s been and what I did
To shed some little light
On someone’s worrisome way —
So to help him walk amid
This darkness... nothing bright —
Just a candle’s breath to say
Something — anything — good...
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:22 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: a
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5326
a
It’s late
at night
and I’m
in bed —
trying
to write
a
at night
and I’m
in bed —
trying
to write
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- Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:33 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: A Mighty Ship She Is
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3199
A Mighty Ship She Is
A mighty ship she is,
So follows she her course —
No matter captain says,
Give way she to the force
Of wind — and of ocean,
Of sky and storm and moon —
We know not where she’ll dock —
But know ‘twill be too soon.
- Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:09 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: It's Time To Settle Down
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3280
It's Time To Settle Down
It’s time to settle down. The clock has rung its bell. The season’s getting cold — And I am growing old. The road just goes around — But all is just as well. The story must be told — Again — again to tell — The world is growing old: It’s time to settle down. ____________________ Firestone Feinberg ...