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congratulations very lovely read.

many thanks

many thanks welcome back

good write great choice
congratulations

Very nice write hope
and love always finds a way

that is jazz poetry

Sneakers squeak
dancing cheek to cheek
hip to gyrating hip
sweat sweetly
dripping down
virginal foreheads
as fiery thoughts
blur any notion
of a lyrical containment
as ruby red lips
rush towards
a satirical arraignment
of forbidden fruit.

very good

Dómine, exáudi oratiónem meam.
Et clamor meus ad te véniat.
ad nauseum

very nice straight from the heart
its the only way i write
nice write

very nice
try this as a thought
Crossing my mind once in awhile
Thinking I don't deserve it but then
its only a thought
Despite all the hatred I still love life
Life is my friend my enemy

keep writing this is a very nice first effort
good work

Tony Fiona

nice title bro

Queen good to hear from you.
Yes a good poem for a tired soldier