Totally rivetting piece. Couple of continuity issues that you'd probably discover in subsequent re-reads, but otherwise well written. Attention grabber all the way through.
How does a girl write?
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- Sat Jun 01, 2002 3:52 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8567
- Fri May 31, 2002 1:33 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4116
Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
First screenplay I've seen. Reminiscent of "Hitchhiker's Guide".
- Wed May 29, 2002 11:00 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Same
- Replies: 16
- Views: 12257
The Same
Id, this is scary in its reality and completeness... for an overnighter! Great story!!! In today's atmosphere of "zero tolerance" the school shoot-em-up portion could get someone into trouble (believe me, I know this from personal experience with things my son has written... let me tell you sometime...
- Tue May 28, 2002 4:06 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: reflections (extended version)
- Replies: 23
- Views: 21506
reflections (extended version)
Hmmm... maybe the audience has gone home?
- Sat May 25, 2002 6:28 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Digging the Bones
- Replies: 16
- Views: 11706
Digging the Bones
Thanks, Nefertari. Have not yet "talked" to publishers... do plan to, perhaps self-publish at first (that's the cheapest route), but it means getting down to brass tacks and ORGANIZING the material (grin).... us procrastinators don't do that very well.
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- Tue May 21, 2002 5:10 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Digging the Bones
- Replies: 16
- Views: 11706
Digging the Bones
LOL... thanks, AKD!
- Tue May 14, 2002 12:03 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Three-Spring
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4350
The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Three-Spring
Keep them coming!!!
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- Mon May 13, 2002 4:44 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5499
The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
I vote long version... but I'm an epic kind of guy *grin*.
- Mon May 13, 2002 10:50 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5499
The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
This is very poetic prose... nice writing style!
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- Mon May 13, 2002 10:50 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Two-Winter
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3192
The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Two-Winter
Love the strings of adjectives... truly picturesque!
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- Mon May 13, 2002 1:56 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Angel
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11151
Angel
Thanks, Moongem! I never know what inspires these pieces, or when to expect them to come to me. So I, too, shall have to wait for the next installment.
- Mon May 13, 2002 1:53 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Digging the Bones
- Replies: 16
- Views: 11706
Digging the Bones
Thank you, moongem. Obviously an immortal race of beings could very well inspire a sequel! *grin*
- Wed May 08, 2002 2:44 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
- Replies: 8
- Views: 7345
The Diner at the Edge of Never
This was just a short inspiration. Glad you like it!
- Wed May 08, 2002 2:43 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Digging the Bones
- Replies: 16
- Views: 11706
Digging the Bones
Hehe... I don't post that much here. The rest of my poems are at allpoetry.com under the same name. Glad you like the stories!
- Wed May 08, 2002 2:41 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Angel
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11151
Angel
Thank you, Buttercup... I'm glad you like my little Angel story! This is probably a one-shot.