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Thank you, Odd D. Love the Tankian quote, BTW.

Very good.

Moushka,

Thanks.

I was going for the metaphor here-man's best friend as man.

I returned the dog to his owner quivering and coated in soot and burrs no reward but the joy of seeing two souls reunited I missed the association how blind the signs silently screaming you called off the search it's pointless "starvation or hypothermia have surely finished him off" I returned scrat...

four walls clean, fresh paint my thoughts chaste pure as first snow empty space filled with longing desire stagnant unfulfilled chandoliers hung with care carpet rolled and tacked bored to tears satellite signal lost in fog and wind driving rain candlelight flickers a collision head-on no survivors ...

Quite a piece. Like very much. Worth re-reading.

Henzs, shellspace71, Mpumelelo:

Thank you!

Wow. Much like!

if the government can do it we know how to screw it -PRIVATIZE IT!- we'll gladly take your taxes and shove 'em up our evil axis -PRIVATIZE IT!- we've got high inefficiency and overhead costs massive advertising and mass layoffs we'll house and feed your troops in your endless wars -PRIVATIZE IT!- we...

Heinzs,

I'll admit I'm as confused as anyone!

Beautiful poem.

you're at my feet right where you belong I'm within my right to revel in your wrong I watch you beg for understanding truth is up in the air it's never landing I'm at a loss to begin to explain losing you has become my gain just wait until this time tomorrow I'll bring the cure for this case of sorr...

Nice. Simple yet effective.