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we live for nothing more,
some ask for nothing less,
i have wanted more than this,
much more i must confess.

dunno were that came from but err cool he h e=p

lol at the bump, u not a camel, i reread this and what i love happens. i get a different reading, i think now its more like he has wanted his whole lofe just to serve this women who he sees as a godess and now like anyman wnats more than just servant and mistress. great great poem

wicked i so look forward to it, im stuck and i cant geet into the right state of mind to write, grr its irrtating

trust me, thats me. i write when things build up too much, its either scream at nothing and get grounded anyway or write the best i can and hope peopole who aprciate the languge we speak will understand

thank you =]

awesome well played, this is my writing style and im glad i found sum1 else who uses it. very nice and it would be great if you could not see peoples flaws and love them for 100 per cent of whats on the inside =]

venom is definately the right word =]

ooo very nice advice, i have trouble with double meanings but im sure ill make it. thanks agen kamusi

The most beautiful thing i ever saw? Her eyes. Simple yet complex, bright yet...dark, Day.Night. For every time her eyes meet mine, our souls burst forth our eyes, a ghostly touch, of lovers thoughts, our lives conjoined. Our prize. Days of joy, and nights of passion, gorged our hearts with fire, th...

thanks for all your comments really help you know...

good, im glad someone raised this issue. war is crap and useless, one of my poems support this tho i can remember which one now, i think that the people who have the problems should sort it out their problems theirselves instead of dragging the people of the world into the mess and really fighting f...

great, desribes well the restraints of life and the amount of pressure placed on ones self. sometime you wish you could just float into the sky and have all the space and freedom you need

cant hide, cant heal. i know, i know. those periods of time you could just lay and stare at the sky and wish that you could just fall into it. well said. well done

wow for one i know what you mean, im not going to say i understand as i believe everyiones experience and/or feelings are different and cannot be understood, except from thast person. very well portrayed, nice ryming scheme

structure of the poem really reflects the title as the italics remind me of the background prayer people(sorry dont know what there called) that repeat lines or phrases, for example when everyone says amen to a prayer. very spiritual and very lustful, love it