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Such great emotion you have packed into this poem.

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Thanks, Leysa and Pam, appreciate the great comments.

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Amazingly beautiful.

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Thanks so much for the kind comments. Kisses are great when they are from someone you truly love.

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Simply beautiful. (I'm not good at critques.)

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Kiss me like you mean it, Under the full moonlight, Where the darkness holds our secrets, And love makes everything right. Kiss me in the heat of day, For all the world to see, Where passion will never betray, And love fulfills all our dreams. Kiss me just for pleasure, With a warmth no one can meas...

I have to agree, it's absolutely beautiful.

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This gives hope for that one true love.

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Memories can be a beautiful thing, and you captured that perfectly. Good write.

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I have to agree, this reads like song lyrics.

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I love the unexpected twist at the end, very original.

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Very beautiful.

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That is so very beautiful.

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This is very beautiful and could easily be wedding vows.

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Your poems paints beautiful pictures.

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