Poetry Pages

Love the title AngelTears ......

Wonderful expression of gratitude and observation of God's handiwork.

A pleasure to read and contemplate your words ....

.jeanne.

I like the subject angeltears ... and the sincerity is nice. However, I felt that in your effort to rhyme some your phrasing and word choices were awkward. Rhyming is wonderful but if it gets in the way of clarity or the message it can be a problem. Just some thoughts you might want to consider ... ...

Too the point...and expressed very well. Sad though ...

.jeanne

Hi Naushin, Really quite lovely. There are several different textures to your poem ... it is of course passionate, but at the same time there is an innocence about it. There are moments sublime and yet there is pining ......... Sincerity throughout ............ wonderful poetry of love and love lost...

A lovely and uplifting poem of inspiration.

Strength when I am weak
Grace from up above
Lover of my soul
Mercy as gentle as a dove

... very nice ...

A pleasure to read .......

jeanne

Great reoccurring refrain ... comes up and punctures you in the heart ...

There a bitterness here that can't be cast away ... expressed with a strong voice in a tight and well penned poem.

jeanne

LorienLord,

I couldn't help but give a chuckle to this sensual little ditty. I could feel the heat ... in more ways than one.

jeanne

Tony, I've read this over several times, and although there is a sense of quiet ... a restful feeling as suggests the title, I can't help but feel something sinister at the end. There image of a nun wishing one dead is rather jarring to me. Not saying that is bad .... I just found it interesting, su...

Many of us can relate .....

Very well written. Thank you for sharing this touching and soul searching write.

.jeanne.

Thank you much Old Poet and Bags .... appreciate it!

... OP ... thanks for catching the "nit" .... it's been corrected...

.j.

Quite lovely ... in thought and word.

.jeanne.

Truly expresses a father's love .........

... very stirring and thought provoking

.j.

"Tommorrow for sure though" !

Seems we've got the same motto Bags....

Thanks Bags... Many thanks to your daughter. Dubai, I'm sure will be very interesting. I'm glad she will not be deployed to Iraq or Afghanistan again. Many blessings to your daughter as well.... My son is back at Camp Pendleton learning all about Helos ... he'll be working on Cobras and Hueys .... H...

C.R.,

A strong and poignant poem.... one which I feel grabs the reader from the very first line to the very emotional ending.

... thank you for writing and sharing... I deeply appreciate your words...

.jeanne.