Poetry Pages

I liked this one... keep adding to it.

Was this really all alone since July? Shame! Thanks for "dag"-in it. (grin)

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Gruesome and sad... what a commentary on the fragility of existence and human frailty!

Now I'm gonna take some anti-depressant medicine to cheer me up some.

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This is a hard one to critique... for obvious reasons. Any of these expressions of personal despair are difficult to view as simply "poems"... because, frankly, they're not!

This sounds like a terribly frightening dream... though I am fully aware that it is based in your own unique reality. The fear really comes through in this. Excellent!

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Love this classical stanza... MORE, MORE! (misquoth the Ravyn)

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Ooh! What a concept!

This version is definitely more readable. Thanks!

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mew

That's what prose is... a story in paragraph form.

Hear, hear! Let's locate the PR designer/inventor and string him up by his own rollertowel (talk about arcane and disgustingly unsanitary). I always use the "handicapped" stall because the door opens outward and I actually have R O O M to move around in without causing myself a serious injury (It's ...

I don't ;think ending on "magic" makes the line "cheesy". I honestly feel that writing, either prose or poetry, should strive for the highest common denominator, not the lowest, in order to make it last through the tests of time and varied audiences. Even the totally lurid Victorian novellas, like "...

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