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- Wed Jun 19, 2002 1:37 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: "Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8091
"Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
You want to hear something funny? I think this is great, but I think it would be even greater with the actual words "fucking", removed. Second paragraph: just end on "it's magic." period. 5th paragraph, just delete "fucking" before the "raunchy". Also try just deleting "cock, cunt" and leave the res...
- Tue Jun 18, 2002 5:47 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Alamiya and Levas
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5888
Alamiya and Levas
Totally sweet, KC. This is so reminiscent for me of the Andre Norton books I was weaned on.
- Fri Jun 14, 2002 5:52 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Angel
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11095
Angel
Thanks, ec... I made her mute on purpose. Glad you liked it!
- Fri Jun 14, 2002 12:17 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Angel
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11095
Angel
Thank you, nefertari... I'm pleased that you think so!
- Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:11 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The New Kid
- Replies: 12
- Views: 9716
The New Kid
No ideas on sequels... maybe later.
- Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:10 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Digging the Bones
- Replies: 16
- Views: 11652
Digging the Bones
I think this is the original post, then I must have done so again at a later date. Here are some other comments: Lil Gray Silver Fox Poet Posted: 20 Mar 2003 06:03:pm Post subject: Digging the Bones -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (*shudder) Another c...
- Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:10 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Angel
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11095
Angel
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- Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:09 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
- Replies: 8
- Views: 7311
The Diner at the Edge of Never
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- Tue Jun 11, 2002 12:27 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Firebug Christmas
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2458
Firebug Christmas
Part of your memoires... needs more.
- Tue Jun 11, 2002 12:25 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Vagabond
- Replies: 28
- Views: 26748
Vagabond
Hey, I like this story...
- Sun Jun 09, 2002 10:11 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Dear Diary 98
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4493
Dear Diary 98
I'll do it for you on this one. You can use the edit function to do this yourself in the future, also to change the title. Title could be "Dear Diary", "My Diary", "Diary of a ______?", etc. etc. use your vivid imagination. Heinz [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [ 06-09-2002: Message edited...
- Sun Jun 09, 2002 8:02 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Dear Diary 98
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4493
Dear Diary 98
The trick is to put these all into the same string and not separate them as individual posts. They stand alone as single entries, but create a greater whole when part of the entire diary.
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- Thu Jun 06, 2002 3:32 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Dear Diary (from an 8 year old's perspective)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1967
Dear Diary (from an 8 year old's perspective)
Perfect! Now add submissions through the developmenta years and you've got a great piece going!
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- Tue Jun 04, 2002 1:21 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4100
Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
Not too many interested in stories or prose... mine don't get much traffic here either.
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- Sat Jun 01, 2002 10:26 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8504
December Burial (Re-Edited version)
I think the big section that starts "The first time...", with all those // dividers could do with being broken into real paragraphs to make it more "presentable" and readable. Think of it as prose, which it is, and let the paragraph breaks suggest themselves to you. As you are doing that, superfluou...