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- Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:44 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Teal
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1912
Teal
I liked this one... keep adding to it.
- Tue Sep 17, 2002 9:01 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: SON WORSHIP
- Replies: 23
- Views: 17258
SON WORSHIP
Was this really all alone since July? Shame! Thanks for "dag"-in it. (grin)
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- Wed Sep 04, 2002 1:44 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Horse on the Train
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2502
The Horse on the Train
Gruesome and sad... what a commentary on the fragility of existence and human frailty!
Now I'm gonna take some anti-depressant medicine to cheer me up some.
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Now I'm gonna take some anti-depressant medicine to cheer me up some.
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- Wed Aug 07, 2002 5:29 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: I Am Here
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3567
I Am Here
This is a hard one to critique... for obvious reasons. Any of these expressions of personal despair are difficult to view as simply "poems"... because, frankly, they're not!
- Sun Aug 04, 2002 4:15 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Smoke Scream
- Replies: 9
- Views: 13608
Smoke Scream
This sounds like a terribly frightening dream... though I am fully aware that it is based in your own unique reality. The fear really comes through in this. Excellent!
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- Sun Jul 28, 2002 1:23 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Haunted
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5361
Haunted
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- Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:19 pm
- Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
- Topic: Epiphany
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7738
Epiphany
Love this classical stanza... MORE, MORE! (misquoth the Ravyn)
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- Sat Jul 13, 2002 10:48 pm
- Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
- Topic: If Ribbon and Bows, Who Knows?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 7711
If Ribbon and Bows, Who Knows?
Ooh! What a concept!
- Sun Jun 30, 2002 6:12 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8503
December Burial (Re-Edited version)
This version is definitely more readable. Thanks!
- Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:17 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: An Embarrassing Diatribe of Mine...and the replies
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3871
An Embarrassing Diatribe of Mine...and the replies
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- Fri Jun 28, 2002 10:42 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Else's Dream
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2175
Else's Dream
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- Wed Jun 26, 2002 10:43 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Is this victory?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4528
Is this victory?
That's what prose is... a story in paragraph form.
- Fri Jun 21, 2002 1:20 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: The Paid Tourist vs Public Restrooms
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4801
The Paid Tourist vs Public Restrooms
Hear, hear! Let's locate the PR designer/inventor and string him up by his own rollertowel (talk about arcane and disgustingly unsanitary). I always use the "handicapped" stall because the door opens outward and I actually have R O O M to move around in without causing myself a serious injury (It's ...
- Wed Jun 19, 2002 11:46 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: "Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8091
"Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
I don't ;think ending on "magic" makes the line "cheesy". I honestly feel that writing, either prose or poetry, should strive for the highest common denominator, not the lowest, in order to make it last through the tests of time and varied audiences. Even the totally lurid Victorian novellas, like "...
- Wed Jun 19, 2002 10:47 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: "Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8091
"Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
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